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ThomasZoey3000


A Brony since 2014, and one that wishes to share stories out of my imagination and sometimes inspired by other works.

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As a way to say thank you for inviting Starlight to the human world, the unicorn offers Sunset Shimmer a chance to visit Equestria. Her visit may not be as eventful as the last two times, but she's still met with meeting leaders of other countries, dealing with a giant monster and a bad tempered changeling, and finally getting the biggest surprise of all time from her family.

Follows along in the timeline of Sunset's Redemption, Sunset's Hearth's Warming and other stories in my fan-made MLP series.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 5 )

Sunset took one look and chuckled, "I think she's referring to Starlight," she whispered to Sunny Rays. "They do almost look alike."

They look nothing alike. :ajbemused:

"Since you're both here, maybe we can chat and see if we can't help each other," suggested Spike.

if we can help each other,"*

In the throne room's dining room, everyone ate, though Twilight wasn't pleased as she saw Ember eating other stuff, namely her food bowl and her walls. She knew dragons loved gems, though she did admit that when Spike invited her, she had forgotten to protect them or infuse them with a re-building spell. She'd have alot of work to do later with fixing up her dining room.

Yep... :twilightoops:

The title alone worried me for a sec as I was immediately thinking of forgotten friendship, aka my least favorite eqg special as the title alone was making me think something bad was gonna happen to Sunset. But it was really Spike. Heh... :twilightblush:

As for Ember not seeing the difference between Twilight and Starlight - this may be a vision problem for Ember not seeing Lavender (Twilight) from Lilac (Starlight). There are other differences (main style, cutie marks, and wings) but we've seen that most ponies (and others) see the horn before noticing the (furled?) wings. Twilight is also slightly taller than Starlight but that isn't as noticeable if they're not that close to each other.

"There's more to it than that," said Sunset. "A good leader needs to understand the wants and needs of their subjects, and must also be willing to help them if they need it. Hence why I wouldn't be a good leader myself, that and my history of course."

With time you could. :ajsmug:

"So much for being unscareable," muttered Sunset.

Yep... :ajbemused:

Her attacks however missed. Trixie stepped forward, ready to teleport, but in the flurry of the moment, she had forgotten the correct way to do it, and thus she and Starlight were captured easily by the changeling. It caught them in a big bag, and began dragging them into the hive.

Thx a bunch Trixie. :duck:

"Maybe not right away, but I'm sure if we keep going at it, we'll get through. Besides," she added, narrowing her eyes, "what would Twilight say if she heard we gave up on a new friend?"

Can't argue there. :applejackunsure:

"Didn't you know, Maulwurf's have really tough skins, they can't get hurt from magical attacks," replied Starlight.

How convenient. :pinkiecrazy:

Also, happy birthday. :twilightsmile:

It didn't take long for Sunset to realize what her parents were trying to tell her, "you're going to have another baby?"

Guess Sunset will have another sibling in the not to distant future. :twilightsmile:

She paused for dramatic effect, making her parents and sister wait with anticipation. Finally, with a smile on her face, she said; "I'd be happy to have Sunny Rays stay with me."

:yay:

"Hey Girls, what's with the new outfits?" she asked.

Sure wasn't expecting this at the end. Let alone this be the last chapter too. :unsuresweetie:

So, Sunset's family is getting another sibling? How nice.

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