With the Peace and Harmony of Equestria threatened by the Zebras and the Caribou, Equestrian salvation may lie with the deadliest weapon ever to ride the rails
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OK, that explains it. I mean, when he had sex with Aurora...yeah. I think it could count as beastiality. No offense,
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Hello KR Chrome,
and yeah, that would kinda be beastility, I guess. That's one of the reasons that Leopard was so concerned.
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Yeah, if she was an anthro wolf than it would've been OK by me.
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But, she isn't, she's just a regular wolf, a sentient one, but still a regular wolf.
Well, I was enjoying this story up until this arc. I'm not a hard person to please, as long as a story has a coherent plot and characters I can root for I'm happy. (And if I'm being honest, just saying the words 'armored 4-8-8-4 war train gives me a slight erection). You had both, up until this arc but you went and made the main characters just as bad as the villains. Killing them on the battlefield is one thing, but if they are raping their prisoners and murdering soldiers who are trying to surrender and begging for their lives then they are just as guilty.
Now I get it, you're going for an Inglorious Bastards thing here where the bad guys just get all kinds of fucked up, but you need to show that the heroes still have some lines they wont cross. Take the 'Jasmine Treatment' for example, the way you left it implied that it was a real thing. If you just had Don confirm to AJ and Twi that he was definitely making that up, then the bad guy would still be freaked out and we, the audience, could still cheer for the heroes because we know they wouldn't actually do that. And don't have the basic henchmen beg for their lives. That's fine for the lead bad guys and their underlings because we clearly see them doing evil things, we know they deserve to die, but when an anonymous soldier who has had no characterization or even lines of dialogue does it, it leave an uncomfortable feeling there because for all we know he could have been drafted and doesn't actually believe in what he's being forced to fight for. (In fact, now that I think about it, you actually had that guy flat out state that he was just enlisted and had a family and everything and the main character killed him anyway. How can I do anything but despise a character like that?)
Anyway, I'm going to read a little further but if this story's so called heroes keep acting like the bad guys they're fighting then I'm just going to stop.
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Hello H3lios,
And I'm glad that you're liking the story so far. However, there is something that you need to understand. I don't explain it the best here, but it begins to make more sense once you start reading "Beyond the Express", the sequel to "Battleship Express". To put it simply, the crew of the Battleship Express have been forced to play witness to things unimaginable. A lot of them were prisoners at one time or another under the Futas, and that messed them up really bad. Guys like Leopard had it the worst, hence the reason that they reacted the way that they did to certain situations in the war.
And a little bit more information on the "Jasmine Treatment". It was used once, and one time only. After the capture of Futa General Jasmine House on December 28th, 2026, during the Battle of St. Louis in WW6, she was taken to that storage car to do penance for her crimes. She was a VERY notorious rapist, sexual predator, murderer, and a traitor to Empress Demetria. She was abused by those she had wronged personally, and for 2 whole days until she was finally sent to a POW camp, where she later died, (or so we hope!) She messed a LOT of people up because of her actions, and now she was being paid by in kind by those she wronged. This was the ONLY time that this happened, and she was the only one who was punished in this manner.
And in regards to those who were killed, even those who seemingly surrendered, there was a reason behind this. If you remember from the Chapter where the hostages were originally being marched through Zebrica when they first arrived there, Dan and Cole came to the horrifying conclusion that ALL of the Zebras, male, female, young and old, were involved with torturing slaves, and POW's. Did all of the Zebras deserve death? That question still remains a mystery. While a lot did, did all of them? Some were indeed captured, and would survive to stand trial, but they were few and far between. However, fret not. The war in the Caribou Empire will see a LOT more prisoners taken, to later stand trial for their crimes. Only the Zebras met this fate, because they were all in on it.
And yes, by all means keep reading. It DOES get better, trust me. ESPECIALLY once the war comes to the Caribou Empire. Yes, there are still a few more iffy/questionable things still to come, but none of them involve mass genocide, (aside from the nuking of the rest of the Zebra Empire in the next chapter, but that was justified.) Overall though, the story does get better, and yes, there is a sequel. Like I mentioned above, "Beyond the Express" comes next if you want to read that one.
As an employee of the Toro brand i call heresy.
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Hello The Redneck,
And we're all entitled to our opinions. I like John Deere, and you like Toro. John Deere's probably been around longer though, and their tractors are MUCH more recognizable!
Me am pissed. Ultron kill Dainn.
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a family friend owns a john deer model g, those things had no starter motor, kill switch, or power steering, and only has two cylinders, and manual choke, yet it is still running strong and can still pull a fully loaded UPS truck out of the snow in the winter, (the reason for all the missing components was for the sake of simplicity, as there are less parts that can fail) the two cylinders make for the famouse sound of a 'johny popper'
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Hello Jimerjam,
And yes, that’s extremely impressive. John Deere’s are my favorite tractors, and they’re so durable and reliable. Of course, the John Deere tractors and other CAT construction machines in this story have been militarized/heavily modified, but overall they still have the same basic look that they once did, and of course, are still painted green and yellow.
Was the right behind your thing a reference to meet the spy?
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Hello NoobMaster69,
And no, I didn't intend for this to be a reference to Spy from TF2, but I can definitely see the correlation
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Fixed them