With the Peace and Harmony of Equestria threatened by the Zebras and the Caribou, Equestrian salvation may lie with the deadliest weapon ever to ride the rails
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oh my
Once I was inside, I shut the door, closed the blinds, used the bathroom, removed my uniform, helped Aurora remove her battle armor, and then I collapsed into my bed, which, completely unknown to me, was already occupied, and not by Aurora!
wow
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Hello Funguy 26,
and yeah, this chapter is "wow"! This was my first "Battle in Equestria" chapter, and if you enjoyed it, you ain't seen NOTHING yet! The later battles are MUCH more intense, and have a LOT more destruction on our enemies!
Nice fight. I think it makes for a nice intro to the war their fighting and tone for the coming fights. Although, I do have to say something about these imperial forces...
........Wow. I mean, seriously, wow! These guys are phenomenally stupid! It doesn't take a graduate with honors from West Point to recognize this plan is half-baked. And yet, all of them are looking at this guy as if he were Sun Tzu because he had enough brain cells to concoct a plan barely more complex than 'rape, kill, rinse and repeat' Even worse, they're already patting each other on the back before they even start marching. Maybe, instead of trying to engage a military force so far out of their league, they should use their magic to search the universe for some slightly more competent military minds. Like General Custer. Or the three stooges.
Don't get me wrong. I think this makes a perfect setup. These weasels like to brag about being 'superior race' and 'mighty warriors' while they have a clear advantage and surprise on their side. Kind of doubt that talk will keep going while being shelled modern artillery, gunships, and nukes.
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Hello redstargazer,
I'm glad that you're liking the story so far. And this has more to do with Stuggs's character. As will be revealed more as time goes on, Stuggs HATES his life. Quietly, he's AGAINST Danin, and doesn't want his men to die. He also DESPISES the Zebras. This is why he pulled a half-baked plan out of his ass, and revealed it while the Zebras were listening. He wanted more of them to die than Caribou. As hinted at in the next chapter, Stuggs DOES have a good plan for attack, and had Humanity not been present, it very well could have succeeded.
However, yes, most of the other Caribou, as well as the Zebras, DO congratulate themselves before victory is secured. And when they actually FIGHT against Humanity? Whoops! Guess they AREN'T as superior as they originally thought that they were!
When you mentioned that the gunship had some A-10 in it, I BRRRRRTed all over the screen
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Hello ElderTemplar,
And yes, our gunship does indeed have parts of a A-10 in it. As stated in the chapter, it has the best elements of an Apache gunship, a C-130 Specter, and an A-10. It has a crew of 7, 2 pilots, 4 gunners, 2 engineers, and the gunship commander, 18 year old Lt. Nathan Hughes. It sees combat many times throughout the story, and is a MAJOR asset against the Zebras and the Caribou in the war ahead.
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Hello Trixiecat,
And yes, pretty much! The gunship has the guns of an a-10, only they’ve been modified to shoot depleted uranium bullets, at a higher rate of fire, thus causing even MORE destruction!
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yes, thats the sound of down right pure freedom raining from above (A-10 is probably one of my favorite planes because of that 30mm mini gun it has and it looks badass)
friendly advice: cut down on the '...........' just three is enough. and you are using exclamation points way too often, is everyone is these scenes yelling all the time?
just some insites after beginning to re read it because it is a good story.
best wishes -jimerjam
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Hello Jimerjam,
And I’ll remember to try and cut back on both of these in the future, which I already have done in my other stories.
And as for why their seemed to be so many exclamation points, that’s because there was a major battle in this chapter, not to mention so much excitement. That’s the reason.
I’m glad that you enjoyed the read though. This is my most popular story, and my first to break first 1k views, and now 2k views, closing in on 2.5k views!
The Fox mask and Dash shipping is forced cringy and honest just badly written, other than that absolute *train wreck* it's a decent story
I like it, just those moments of RD just referring to him as 'stud ' makes this feel like a fever dream instead of a story
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Hello Imperial-Arstotzka,
And this was my 3rd story, and my first successful one. I was still learning, though I’m sorry that you didn’t like the Kitsune mask, or the Rainbow Dash Shipping. Most people seemed to, though her referring to him as “Stud” is just a staple in most of my stories. Most females do that to the main character
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Hello Luckyfanisaac,
And good catch