With the Peace and Harmony of Equestria threatened by the Zebras and the Caribou, Equestrian salvation may lie with the deadliest weapon ever to ride the rails
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bwuahaha good on them. Should change all the lights on big boy to be ghostly green and dye the smoke green for when they hit their next target and play off the ghost train bit.
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Actually, I'd wager pitch black smoke would work better, and replacing the lights with UV lights(blacklights) would just add to it. [considering there are a couple of materials that start glowing in some color when in UV-light]
@Scarfox think i figured out your twist. Somehow, someway at the end of it all, sombras horn is going to be reattached and he will free himself from leopard.
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Hello Marauder15,
And I'm glad. Hang on to your seat though, because the final climactic battles, are going to be taking place very soon, like beginning in the next chapter soon!
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Hello Coniwolf,
And don't worry, when the next battle begins, we Humans will put a whole new meaning to "Psychological warfare". Our enemies think that we're dead, and we have a "ghost train", as well! We plan on using both of these factors to their FULLEST extent! I don't want to spoil anything yet, but I can say, that it will be, as Reginald would say, "Smashing!" Not to mention, "ghostly"!
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Hello M127,
And both you, and conigwolf have both given me very great ideas. I plan on using a mixture of them, and making the Caribou so scared, that they just might die of fright, and make our job that much easier!
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Hello ShadowLight96,
And what if I told you that you were on the right track, but now, 3 major factors will come together at the very end, and set up the biggest twist of them all. Sombra? He's only 1 of the 3. Any guesses as to what the other 2 factors might be? Well, if not, I guess that you'll just have to keep reading to find out! *evil laughter*
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Dash and spit are another I'm sure. The 3rd however i can only guess has to do with the showdown with Dian.
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Hello ShadowLight96,
And no, Dash and Spitfire are NOT a factor. Also, there won't be a showdown with Danin this time around. HOWEVER, there WILL be a showdown, and a leader will die. Chapter 23 will reveal who this "leader" is, and no, he has not been mentioned before in the story.
I've hinted before at how Battleship Express will end, and how that one twist will set up not only the sequel, but another sequel as well. Now I'm revealing that the twist has 3 major factors that overlap. Sombra is only one of the 3 factors. And, unless you can correctly guess what the other 2 factors are, I'll just reveal everything when the time comes.
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Fixed them