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PeriwinkleLove


Ηi!Welcome to my page!Writter here on Fimfiction as you guessed(though an ammateurXD),anyways,hope you will like my future stories,and,yeah,Discord lover too,GO DISCORD!Mlp for life

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Both Twilight and the main six have noticed that Discord has been pretty moody and not his annoying self for the past few days and they're not the only ones.Even the two royals sisters had that in notice,so the girls make it their mission to find out what's Discord's problem.
But,is there something that Discord just doesn't want to tell them?Even to Fluttershy herself?
Is it time for Discord to tell them something importand about him?
'In this bright future,you can't forget your past'
Bob Marley once said...Discord more than enough knows that quote too well...

Edit:I've changed the previous description because I made it too,well,not great description:twilightoops:
#2Edit;Some small changes,like correcting some words and giving every chapter a title
#3Edit;Now with cover

WARNING:
I am an ammature writer and I will try to improve my writing skills throught each chapter,so any comments about improving my writing is welcome :pinkiehappy:
PLEASE no hate comments!
And I promise you it is a great way to pass your free time!!:twilightblush:
Enjoy!:twilightsmile:

Chapters (18)
Comments ( 19 )

Good premise, get editor. Please!

Comment posted by PeriwinkleLove deleted Dec 14th, 2017

'In this bright future,you can't forget your past'

Did Rob Marley really say that?

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Yep,search the quote if you want,it was said from Bob Marley
Kind of the quote that inspired me,I dunno,just did...

A few grammar issues but no one is perfect. I myself have horrible English since it is my second language but I have an editor to help me. Also I like how you protray Discord as the kind of person to hide his feelings cause he doesn't want to appear as a weak creature to anyone. Really makes him more adorable XD

Okay get ready to board the feels train. Choo choo!

Well I,can tell you Akiko would do the same thing XD. Let's just say she isn't the nicest with ponies especially the Elements of Harmony. She practically hates them. She can stand Fluttershy only a bit. Discord has to practically beg her to try and be nice but we'll, who's the older sister now?

Welp there might be war now is that why the Mane are nervous?

When Discord was suicidal or depressed or whatever I wanted to sing Rolling Girl XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD.
Also cute moments! Still have some grammar issues but this was a every heartwarming chapter!

Aww man, Someone is chopping Onions again!:fluttercry:

“Yep,I think so.Remember when Pinkie was trapped in Discord’s dimension?”

Squeeeeeeeeee!!!!!! You read that comic too!:yay::twilightblush::pinkiehappy:

Nice, but for some reason the beginning of the chapter repeats on itself. Also, don't the girls already know that so wouldn't it be Luna and Celestia surprised at the news?

“Well good job there princess of friendship,” He smiled a bit,his eyes were like he remembered some old memory and then they were like they were holding back tears.

The grammar in this story hurts

Can you summarize everything that happened in this story? I had a vision problem and I have about 100 stories to read, I won't have time to read the big ones anymore

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