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In the magical land of Equestria there live monsters most are evil and destructive bent on the destruction this peaceful land, but buried in the past lurks a peaceful guardian ready to awaken in order to challenged the Ultimate Evil, a world destroying force on a direct collision course with this world of pastel colored ponies. Its up one shy Pegasus to lead this 'monster' in saving the world, but she won't be alone!

Its Godzilla meets My Little Pony, what can you expect but awesomeness worthy of Rainbow Dash.

Disclaimer: My Little Pony Friendship is Magic is property of Hasbro, Godzilla and associated materials are property of Toho. Ideas and themes are inspired by the works of KaijuSamurai http://kaijusamurai.deviantart.com/ And the awesome cover art http://slugbox.deviantart.com/art/Fluttershy-272799711 is property of Slugbox http://slugbox.deviantart.com/

Please read and Review I would really like to have feed back and to hear what you all think.

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Comments ( 54 )

a brony and a godzilla fan...i love you:heart:

919818 That's what I am aiming for...it gets better really! Thanks for reading!:pinkiehappy:

919935 I love you too:eeyup:, I just wanted to merge my childhood obsession with my current obsession. Thanks for reading:heart:

Dorats...LOOK THE FUCK OUT!!!:pinkiegasp:

Awesome to see it here! :yay:

A few grammar errors in the description, will edit this when I finish reading. EDIT: Okay, looking good! Just a few grammar errors, but nothing too distracting. I DEMAND MORE!

More godzilla is requested, my good sir :moustache:

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More Godzilla is on way soon my friend!

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And more shall arrive soon. Thank you for checking my grammar, it has always been tough for me.

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Yes, Dorats are never a good sign for things to come! :ajsmug: *hint hint*

I have but one request: Mothra Leo, please...if it's not too much trouble?:fluttershysad:

There was Fluttershy of all ponies not just flying in easiest the worst storm in Ponyville’s history but dispelling it single handedly.

Ponies have hooves, not hands!:flutterrage::rainbowdetermined2::twilightangry2::facehoof::duck:

So we learn that Battra (larvae) destroyed Applelossa,:pinkiegasp::applecry: and Fluttershy gets to watch Mothra hatch from her egg.:yay:

One nitpick:

We could nothing hurt.

should be "We could do nothing to hurt it." (words in red are words you really should have used):ajbemused:

Oh, buck. King Ghidorah's coming to Ponyville, isn't he?:fluttershbad::pinkiegasp::rainbowderp::raritydespair::twilightoops:

based on color and body same

should be "based on color and body shape". Also,

I’ll investigate the matter when I leave. To hear you're well, Rainbow, makes me relieved. Based on size I’d say her appetite you should beware, until I return I bid you farewell.” She said as she exited the room.

1607964 :yay: Thank you for all the comments and grammar checks. Mothra Leo being in this story, :eeyup: Battra Larvae destroyed Appleossa, :eeyup: King Ghidorah...:moustache: I hope to have the next few chapters done for december, and hopefully they'll have less errors :scootangel: Thanks again for reading this story and I'll see you IN Brighter Days!:eeyup:

So we will get to see Mothra Leo?:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:

1608079 :eeyup: And maybe some other forms of Mothra will show up...but can't tell you that...Or else I'd have to kill you:pinkiecrazy:

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Well, Rainbow Mothra, Aqua Mothra, Lightspeed Mothra, Armor Mothra, and Eternal Mothra are all forms of Mothra Leo.:trollestia: (Imagines Rainbow Dash's reaction when she sees Rainbow Mothra...:pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::raritywink::twilightsmile::yay:)

So apparently the author of the Daring Do books knows something about Mothra and Battra...sounds legit.:rainbowdetermined2:

1623476 I was going with the idea that where Mothra and Battra come from had faded into legend and provide inspiration for the author of the Daring Do series...so yes, quite legit:twilightsheepish:

1623926 Can't wait to see Rainbow Dash's reaction to seeing Mothra Leo's Rainbow Mothra form.:rainbowderp:...:rainbowkiss:

1658709 I haven't written that scene yet, but yes I imagine she is going be quite excited about that!:rainbowdetermined2:

I'm going to take a guess and say that Spike is going to fill in Godzilla's role in the up coming monster battle royale right?:ajsmug:

Oh my goodness. It looks like all that food caused Mosura to have a massive growth spurt.:twilightoops:

I'm curious: When the final battle starts, will it be Mothra and Mothra Leo vs Battra and King Ghidorah?:duck:

Comment posted by Uzume Tennouboshi deleted Dec 29th, 2012

1870059 Or it could be Godzilla himself who fills that role, since Mothra and Battra are from Godzilla's world.:twilightsmile:

True but I would still like Adult Spike to join the grand fight.:unsuresweetie:

1871173 But how would he change back afterwards? Remember what he was like the last time he changed like that?:applejackconfused::derpytongue2::rainbowderp::unsuresweetie::raritydespair::twilightoops:

Who to say that he doesn't learn how to control it at least a little bit this time around?:ajsmug:

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I hear your theory and I subsitute it with my own.:trollestia:

1878524 No need to fight you two, I'm happy you guys like the story enough to debate what happens in future chapters,:applejackunsure: But I would like to know what you like about this chapter and how I may improve, if that's okay with you?:fluttershysad:

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Eh, sorry about that.:twilightblush: As for this chapter as long as you go more into the events around Spike leaving later I can't complain about it.:twilightsmile:

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Well you could probably do with some more proofreading, or a beta. Some of the sentences are awkward and there are quite a few instances of misspelling, or simply the wrong word, and the occasional punctuation mistake.

For example:

I hint of guilt over her actions a week prior involving her loyal assistant crept into her mind.

I have no idea what "I" is really supposed to be here. The general idea that she feels guilty about what happened she did to Spike comes through, but the sentence itself doesn't make any sense.

I like it. U have a unique taste for mothra. I hope u like my story 2. It has all the Kaijus including mothra.
- Dreadwing45:ajsmug:

2777627 Thank you commenting, :twilightsmile: I'll be sure to check your story out.

Am I sensing King Ghidorah in the future?

Okay, so Shining Armor is Captain Gordon, Princess Cadance is all for shipping Spitfire and Soarin, Fluttershy's looking for Mosura, Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie are visiting the weather factory, Pinkie Pie made a reference to The Rainbow Factory (which I hope you give a Take That to by eventually showing that that's NOT how rainbows are made), Spike's having trouble with a growth spurt, Twilight was just barely able to keep the situation with Spike a secret from Rarity and Sweetie Belle, and Braeburn has just had a completely unexpected encounter with Mothra, which is sure to bring back memories of his previous encounter with Battra.

Oh yeah, and that meteor? That's no meteor, it's King Ghidorah!

Badge time!

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I'm kind of curious about when the Elias will show up to explain things to everypony, because now that Braeburn has had another encounter with Mothra, he's going to be very nervous unless he's told that she's a guardian and not a destroyer...

2839181 lol I thought maybe it was space godzilla but crystals on the meteor weren't mentioned so I guess not

2839181 or the meteor might be space godzilla or godzilla himself.

2839448 Besides, this makes it a nice Mythology Gag to Ghidorah the Three-Headed Monster, who practically invented the travel-to-the-next-world-you-plan-to-destroy-in-a-meteor tactic.

Of course, that didn't do him much good against the combined forces of Godzilla, Rodan, and a larva Mothra, and since Spike just had a massive growth spurt and we've been promised that Mothra Leo is also going to appear...he's going to need much more power if he wants to actually be a threat.

2839525 Can't be Godzilla, because there's absolutely no reason he should have been trapped in one.

And as for SpaceGodzilla, if it was him, it would be a giant crystal meteor, but this one seems to be a regular meteor.

2839181 :yay:So glad you like the new chapter and I love the badge, maybe I'll make eagle brony (ha) But yes things are getting intense and the ball has started rolling for the story to really pick up speed and become awesome-tacular. Thanks for the wonderful comments. I hope to have the next chapter out by next week, as I am putting new furniture in a room this week. But rest easy as update will be coming at a faster pace. :eeyup:

2839542 Well, Event Horizon said it had a reflective surface... so, yeah.:applejackunsure:

2874462 So naive. There are four reasons why you're wrong.

First, just because it's reflective doesn't necessarily mean it's a crystal.

Second, Spacegodzilla travels on a large mass of crystals that don't exactly resemble an ordinary meteor. Here's an image to back up this point

images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20130617134705/godzilla/images/5/5b/Spacegodzillaflying.jpg

Third, if it was him, his body would be quite visible, so Event Horizon would be able to see it and quickly realize that it's not a real meteor.

Finally, his main goal following his defeat in Godzilla Vs SpaceGodzilla would be to get revenge on Godzilla. And since Godzilla isn't on Equestria, your theory is extremely Jossed.

2875075 Well, considering I don't care much about space rocks unless its really important, yeah. I guess naive would work. Also, i have no clue what Spacegodzilla is, so i wouldn't know.:ajbemused: Along with that, Event Horizon is using almost ancient telescopes(its not like he has the Hubble). Soooooooo yeah.:ajsmug:

With all this talk of Energy draining oversized bugs, I'll be disappointed if Megaguirus doesn't put in an appearance. Especially since she's on the cover image.

Okay...am I the only one concerned that the Equestrians are 'exterminating' the changelings?:twilightoops: I mean, that's just...wrong. {And everyone's okay with it?....:rainbowderp:}

Good story otherwise.

You might want to double-check the grammar, but other than that, the story is awesome so far. :twilightsmile:

This story is great so far, but are you sure it's right for the ponies to be exterminating the changelings?

Well wouldn’t you say that was an egg-citing third chapter…crickets…please review and thanks for reading.

ISWYDT.

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