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Big Macintosh comes across a lost filly in Sweet Apple Acres and enters a dangerous adventure to keep her safe from the dangers in the Everfree forest. Fast foreward as Big Macintosh and Applebloom are in danger of falling to their doom, but who is that mysterious pony coming to the rescue. It a FlutterMac fic, enjoy. This is for the FlutterMac group contest on Deviantart. The cover are is by Mealjo and can be found here
http://mealjo.deviantart.com/art/And-I-did-the-flyby-afterwards-287750673
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Chapters (2)
Comments ( 26 )

Nice story it be cool if you continued it

Yeah, I really hope this is going to continue.

276387 I had a few Ideas. I've post on other sites and that seems to be the main comment I've been getting. Thanks for the Comment. :yay::heart::eeyup:

this idea has so much potential :pinkiehappy:

this needs a sequel like right NAO:applecry:

anyway great story i think that i read this in DA before and i let a comment saying that well this needs a sequel! lol

keep upthe good work :twilightsmile:

Confound these pony drive you write good!
Keep up the goodwork.:moustache:

its awsome to see that you dcided to continue this :pinkiehappy: really good chaptr for a beginning and im having a lot of ideas to where this story can go so yeah cant wait for your next update :twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

354240 :pinkiehappy: Thank you for the comment. It's not my best work. It originally was going to be longer, but I felt before we get into the plot we needed to establish why Fluttershy was taking more of a role as Mare-Do-Well. Next part is going to be fun because were going have a yet another disaster and first confrontation between Mare-Do-Well and RD as well as seeing what Big Mac is going to be doing in the story. Thanks again for reading.

354288 Thank you for reading :pinkiehappy: It's people like you who made me decide to take this fic further. I'm glad you have ideas, I have a lot too and you'll start to see the outlines of them in the next chapter. I'm glad to see you liked it and I hope subsequent parts will continue to entertain people.

355522 lol well, thank you not only for the 1st chapter that really give to all of us desire for more thanks for continue this :pinkiehappy: and i read anything with Fluttershy and Big Mac because i like this pairing a lot you also added the condiment of heroism in both characters and for what i thinking not only Fluttershy will play hero in this Mac also will some time i believe but that its up to you :eeyup: so yeah as i said before cant wiat for your next update and keep up your awesome work

378599 Glad you liked how I continued this:pinkiehappy:

I probably already said something on the FF.net version of this story, but I'll say something again, just for the sake of using the Flutterage emoticon. :flutterrage: I just love that face. :flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

Anyways, the story is unfolding quite nicely and has kept me interested. I did catch quite a few errors though, so I would highly recommend reading your stories over before posting or getting a beta-reader.

All in all, I'd love to see another chapter soon.

Also, :flutterrage:

428834 I'm glad you like how its going. Yeah :ajsleepy: I'm not good with my grammar and spelling. If I had a beta reader it would make things easier on me. I'm glad your liking it and hopefully the next chapter is better. :scootangel:

I am glad you are continuing this story. Also, you did have some parts where words were left out.

Example: “I don’t know, Shy. It’s a lot of work and could dangerous.” it should be "I don't know, Shy. Its a lot of work and could be dangerous."

Keep up the great work. :pinkiehappy:

Oh man this story is just so amazing that I had to read it a second time.:yay::heart::eeyup:

537532 :pinkiehappy: Thank you so much. I'm glad your liking it. I hope to have the next chapter up some time next week. :eeyup::heart::yay:

I DEMAND ADDITIONAL PYLONS (Chapters) :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: / 5

615804 Thanks for the comment!:yay:Request Herd (lol) But yes New Chapters will be coming more now that its summer. :moustache:Prepare your body.

1220665 Yeah. I just realized how behind on...everything I am. Its been rough. But I'm finally on some ADD Meds and they have really helped me. I really do hope to come back to this story soon. Thank you and people like you who keep procrastinators like me honest! You sir rock.

Fluttershy deciding to make up for being a scardy-pony by becoming a costumed heroine? A mystery-mare? And why not? :pinkiehappy:

Maybe... just maybe... Fluttershy has found her calling?

I like this tale. Like many have said, I could see many directions on where this could go. Hope that you continue this story. But no rush, I'm willing to wait.

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