During Applejack's time in Manehatten with her relatives she met young colt name Caramel. Now, many years later Applejack has hired Caramel as a farm hand, not remembering him as the charming colt from her youth. Will they reunite or will their love story end before it ever began.
Disclaimer: I do not own the characters or concepts from the series My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, nor do I own any of the songs by artist Taylor Swift. Please be courteous, read and review. Please enjoy. This goes out to my main man CaramelMLP on deviantart. Cover image provided by Ojos-Color-Bosque http://carameljack-lovers.deviantart.com/gallery/?set=32776462&offset=48#/d4inmnl
Chapters (2)
Simply d'aww.
Okay, I'm just gonna do it now before the shitstorm. Paragraph it so it doesn't look like a massive wall of text. Paragraph start whenever someone starts talking. Besides that, looks promising.
414186 Thanks for commenting. Yes that was the emotion I was going for. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
414236 Thanks for the tip mate. Made the changes. I hope you enjoy further chapters. Thanks for reading
Dawww!
Lemmie guess, based it off on Taylor Swift's songs eh?
414851 I hoped you liked it and yes there will Dawww
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Yeah the whole story will be based on the songs and lyrics of Taylor Swift...just felt right for the story, but if people don't like it won't effect the story in anyway. I hope you liked it and thanks for the comment. 
awwww
sort of needs some proof-reading.
Nice, I'm looking forward to more
For some reason, maybe it was the music, it made me feel/think that the story ended. Iunno, still, good job.
484385 Glad you liked
and 
yes i am in desperate need of a proof reader.
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Really happy you liked it. More will be coming. Yeah the music is an important part of the story and I'm glad it affected you. This is far from the end and it won't be the last time I use that song. Thanks again!!!
Did I hear that you needed a proofreader?
Coolioto at your service! Please, call me by my OC's name, Silver.
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Well Silver. Yes. I would love to have a proofreader for this and future projects. If that isn't asking to much. I'm not really good at proof reading, but I could write a commission fic for you, if you want. Any help with proofreading could be great as it is not my strong suit. On the other note, what do you think of this fic? Sorry just really like getting back feedback. Thankies for the offer Silver
486215 Im a bit stupid, but what's a commission fic?
Anyway, I think the story is good, it transitions well, dialogue is believable as well as canon personalities. It works well, and you should definetly expand.
Silver out.
PS: As I was going through my notices, I saw "DarthSylar is watching you"
O.o I was freaked out a bit.
Nice! At first I wasn't sure if I liked the idea of it being based off of Taylor Swift songs, but I'm liking it now. Taylor Swift just suits AJ well.
nice story, lively. you write well. i kow there wwere a few mistakes and all but really i didnt notice them when i was reading. hope for an update soon. :)
....More? Please?