Yeah i think it needs a chapter 2 otherwise the story just feels short and abruptly ends.

I am also of the opinion this needs a second chapter

Didn't read much, but I have to say, the ponies of Manehattan did show her disrespect they likely wouldn't have shown to Celestia in Rarity Takes Manehattan.

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I used that as an example when I was deciding the setting. I made sure to set this outside of Canterlot. Besides, poking fun at Baltimore/Bronycon this week.

Yes, this needs a second chapter.

Chapter 2. Make it so number !

the characters getting used to their size is the most interesting part of any growth story

The ending of this chapter doesn't feel like an end to a story.

Do it do it do it.

A very rare story that features asset swapping, I've only seen 6 stories that feature it predominately. I'd like your permission to add it to the group: https://www.fimfiction.net/group/211885/size-stealing if that's okay with you.

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Sure thing. I'll even join the group and add anything else I do to it.

I think you have a neat idea that could be explored more beyond just a sex scene. You could easily get like three or four chapters out of this.

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True, possibly so. I do have other ideas too.

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Alright, alright, you guys won me over. Expect 1-2 more chapters!

Heh, part of me kinda wants to see Twilight and Celestia go at it.

when's the next chapter coming out?

oh wow, I was actually the one who got this image commissioned! I'm so proud someone made a story to go with it!

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Thank you for the inspiration!

new chapter when

I would love to see a chapter 2 for this

Still hoping to see more of this! Such a great start!

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Same!

Please make a second chapter. I want to see what becomes of both Twilight and Celestia

WHERE THE HELL IS THAT CHAPTER?

Real shame this never got updated. Oh well.