Rainbow Dash's Night Classes

by garatheauthor

Chapter 3

Rainbow Dash sipped her ice coffee. It was the perfect drink for a warm summer night.

Once again, the girls and she were back at the little café near campus. Like usual it lacked a consistent evening crowd, especially since the semester had just ended. Though it was close to all their flats, so they continued to visit it out of convenience.

The girls had all successfully powered through their introductory year of university and were enjoying their time off. It would be the longest summer they had ever had. A whole four months instead of the usual two.

“So, what are you girls taking next year?” Twilight asked.

“I haven’t decided yet,” Fluttershy said. “How about you two?”

Sunset waved her hand. “We’re going to continue with physics.”

“We are?” Twilight asked.

Sunset nodded. “We are.”

“Well I guess that makes sense,” Twilight said. “How about you Rainbow?”

Rainbow Dash looked to Fluttershy, who nodded to her. “Well I’m actually thinking about getting into biology. Fluttershy’s been telling me about physiotherapy and it sounds pretty rad.”

“Oh, I knew a girl in that program,” Sunset said.

“Did she like it?”

“To be honest she dropped out after a couple months. I’ve heard that you need to be pretty committed if you want to make it through.”

Fluttershy smiled. “Oh, I wouldn’t be worried about that. rainbow can do just about anything she sets her mind to.”

Rainbow Dash flushed at the comment. “T-thank you.”

Sunset quirked an eyebrow. “Are you alright Rainbow?”

“Yeah, yeah, sorry. It’s just a little hot out tonight,” Rainbow said.

Twilight chuckled. “No kidding. It must have been like 25 degrees out today.”

Fluttershy reached over and squeezed Rainbow Dash’s hand. “I’m going to use the little girl’s room. Do you mind grabbing me another iced lemonade?”

“Yeah of course,” Rainbow said.

“Oh, and feel free to buy yourself a treat. It’s on me.”

Rainbow looked taken aback, though she managed to stay calm. “Alright, thank you very much.”

“Just don’t get anything too sugary. Oh, and make sure it’s decaf.” Fluttershy turned her attention to the girls. “We’ll be right back.”

“Yeah, yeah, no problem,” Sunset said.

With that they got up and parted ways, leaving Twilight and Sunset alone.

Sunset drummed her fingers against the table. “So, twilight. Do you think we should tell them?”

---

Rainbow Dash knew something was up. It had been brewing for the past couple of days. Miss Fluttershy had been growing more and more lenient with her. As her usually regimented life became increasingly irregular.

A week ago, Miss Fluttershy weakened her first rule by allowing her to speak whenever. Well, as long as it wasn’t used to interrupt her, talk during class, or cuss.

At first this had been confusing. For months, her speech had been heavily regulated by Miss Fluttershy. Now it felt strange to talk with such boldness. At first, she had almost been too shy to speak. Yet over the week she managed to talk with Miss Fluttershy with increasingly confidence.

On top of this, the assignments had taken on a bizarre tone. The lessons were a collection of the previous four months worth of classes. Miss Fluttershy claimed that they were a review of everything she had learned.

She had obviously aced these with ease. Much to the pride of Miss Fluttershy.

Finally, there was the weirdest thing of all. It was 6:10 in the evening and Dash was alone at the lesson table. While she had been on time, Miss Fluttershy was still absent.

Where was she? Had Miss Fluttershy given special instructions that she had missed? No that couldn’t have been it. Something must have happened.

The anxiety of her absence ravaged Dash’s uneasy stomach with carnivorous butterflies.

The door to her apartment clicked and swung open as Fluttershy walked in. “Sorry I’m late, rainbow.”

She looked… incredible. Most people would call her current attire conservative but to Dash it was almost erotic.

Fluttershy’s casual wear was replaced with a stunning pale pink summer dress which perfectly fitted her petite form. She looked so confident in it, so in control.

Rainbow’s mouth must have hung open because Miss Fluttershy blushed at her reaction.

“Is it too much?” she asked.

“It’s…it’s perfect”

They had known each other for years and to Dash she had never looked as beautiful as she had now.

Fluttershy took a seat at the table, sitting close to Dash.

This too was an oddity, as they were usually seated at complete opposite ends from each other.

Rainbow breathed in her perfume. It was nice, smelling faintly of lilacs and other summer flowers.

“I wanted to talk to you about your progress,” Fluttershy said.

A sudden wave of unease overtook Dash. Had she been bad? Was Miss Fluttershy disappointed?

“O-oh.” Rainbow said.

Miss Fluttershy could read her like a book. “Oh no, no, no. It’s nothing bad. In fact, I wanted to tell you how proud of you I am.”

“Really?!” She was barely able to keep her voice steady.

“It’s been four months since we began this part of our relationship and I’m stunned at the progress you’ve made. I couldn’t be happier with the young woman I’ve helped shape.”

Rainbow didn’t know what to say. So, she settled on silence. This wasn’t what she expected by a longshot. She still felt like she had so much to learn.

Fluttershy reached over and squeezed her hand. “You’re a young woman that I can take pride in claiming as my own, rainbow. “

“Does…this mean?”

“I have no more lessons to teach you. From this day on I am happy to end my tutelage. As such you’ll no longer have to attend classes, write lines, or sleep on the couch.”

She felt overwhelmed and unready. However, if Miss Fluttershy entrusted her, then Dash would do nothing to betray that.

“Is there anything I can do to repay you?” Rainbow Dash asked.

Fluttershy looked surprised. She had obviously not been expecting that question. “Just promise that you’ll be mine, forever.”

There wasn’t even a moment’s pause. “I promise, Miss Fluttershy.”

“Please, rainbow. You can call me Shy again,” Fluttershy said

That phrase. It felt like a relic of a bygone age. Still if Miss Fluttershy wanted it.

“Of course, Shy,” Rainbow said. “I promise to be yours forever. I’d be nothing without you.”

Fluttershy paused and then smiled. “That may be true…but I would never think about leaving you. I love you, rainbow.”

“I love you too, Shy.”

I love you too, Miss Fluttershy

Fluttershy stood up and embraced Rainbow from behind.

“Now, I want you to get changed. Your outfit looks incredibly dorky,” Fluttershy said.

Hey, Miss Fluttershy picked this out. Wait…but she was also the one insulting it.

The paradox was confusing to say the least.

Rainbow grinned. “Blame my owner. She’s the one who picked it out.”

Fluttershy smirked. “She must be weeb trash.”

She moved away, allowing Rainbow to get to her feet.

“Now I’ve laid out something for you to wear. It’s in the bedroom. You’re taking me out on a date tonight.”

Rainbow nodded. “Right away, Miss…SHY.”

---

Rainbow Dash laid naked in bed, cradling an unconscious Fluttershy in her arms.

Their night together had been fantastic. First, they went to some sushi place that Fluttershy enjoyed and ordered a massive dinner. Then they went to some bar and enjoyed a couple of cocktails. Though not too many. Fluttershy would never have allowed that.

Finally, they had come back to their apartment a little tipsy, and, well, one thing led to another. At which point Fluttershy had decided to relieve four months of pent up sexual tension into a two-hour session of sitting on Dash’s face.

Even now, her jaw still ached.

Fluttershy had even seen to it that Dash was allowed to get off. Though only once. It’d be unladylike to allow her to climax twice. At least that’s what Fluttershy had mumbled before passing out from her twelfth orgasm.

Though who was counting? Certainly not Rainbow Dash.

It was strange being in bed. The mattress was far softer and larger than the lumpy sofa she had spent the last four months sleeping on. Of course, those issues were purely superficial.

Her main concern was that it just didn’t feel right. It didn’t feel like she belonged here. The idea of being in bed made her feel like she was occupying a station that she had no right being present in. To share this bed gave her the vague idea of being equal to Miss Fluttershy.

But she wasn’t equal.

Miss Fluttershy was perfection. She was beautiful, intelligent, kind, strong, and dedicated. There were no flaws to her. Dash on the other hand was a troublemaker, deviant, and source of stress. Miss Fluttershy only provided while Dash took like some kind of parasite. That hardly seemed fair.

Fluttershy stirred. “A-are you still awake?”

“Yeah,” Rainbow said.

“Mmm, is something the matter?”

“No…nothing.”

“Liarrrrr.”

She turned around and embraced Rainbow, holding her close.

“What’s up?” Fluttershy asked.

Rainbow sighed. “I don’t feel like I should be here. In this bed.”

“What…what do you mean?”

“It kind of feels like I’m invading your space.”

“Well stop thinking like that.”

If only it were that easy.

“How?”

“Easy. I asked you to be here. So, obviously you deserve to be here because I ordered it. Are you questioning my decisions?”

Was she?

“No, of course not. I’m sorry Shy. It’s just that I feel like I’m not equal in this relationship.”

“You’re not. That’s kind of the point.”

“I mean like… I feel like I’m only taking while you’re giving me so much.”

“Ohhhh. Well you’re wrong.”

“What?”

“Sure, I put a lot of work into our relationship over the past four months, but so did you. You were an excellent student who took everything I taught seriously. You proved to me how much this relationship means to you. I’m touched by that.”

Rainbow smiled.

“Plus, rainbow. You’re the girl who brought me out of my shell in high school. If it wasn’t for you I wouldn’t be anything like I am now. Maybe our relationship might be a bit…unique but it’s still a relationship. We both contribute something that makes the two of us stronger, than if we were alone. I don’t want you thinking for a second that I don’t appreciate or value any of the stuff you do.”

“T-thanks Shy.”

Fluttershy nodded and kissed Rainbow on the lips.

“Mmm, don’t mention it. I knew getting into this that it would take some work. But, I agreed to do it because I love you rainbow and I wanted to see the best you possible. Do you understand?”

“Y-yeah.”

She nodded. “Good because as of tonight I’ve never seen you closer to reaching that ideal. I love you rainbow and I have never, ever, been prouder.”

“I love you too, Shy.”

Fluttershy’s hands rested on the back of Rainbow’s head. For a moment, she thought she was going to pull her into a kiss. Instead, she attempted to shove her under the covers.

“Now help me get back to sleep.”

Comments

[OmniFox]

What did Sunset mean to.....

Sunset drummed her fingers against the table. “So, twilight. Do you think we should tell them?”

[Starlight Nova]

What does D/s stand for?

[garatheauthor]

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Dominate/submissive

[icecreammac]

So, I couldn't really get into this story. All it did was portray Fluttershy's and Rainbow's dysfunctional relationship as romantic. Now, I could've lived with that if it was actually brought up, and I thought it was coming when Rainbow kept arguing with herself about "Shy" and "Miss Fluttershy", but that just led to the bedroom scene, where Fluttershy flat-out says that they're not equals in the relationship even after Rainbow got Fluttershy off twelve times. Shy even controlled the number of times Rainbow could climax! And Rainbow was perfectly fine with it. That's not a healthy relationship, and I just couldn't get behind it.

On an unrelated note, make sure to capitalize proper nouns (like names) every time they appear. I've noticed that, with one or two exceptions, you didn't capitalize Rainbow's or Twilight's names when a character was speaking them. Part of me thinks there's a deeper meaning, but if there is, I'd still let context clues show it instead.

[garatheauthor]

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This is a D/s fic portraying a D/s relationship. Any errors in punctuation are intentional.

[icecreammac]

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According to the author's answer to my comment, I'd assume Sunset is talking about sharing with their friends that she and Twilight are in a dom/sub relationship (although if you ask me, it really didn't mean anything to the story and could just as easily have been skipped unless there's a sequel about them in the works, in which case, fair enough). I just hope it's a better one than Rainbow's.

[garatheauthor]

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If you have questions about D/s I'd be happy to answer them.

[icecreammac]

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I'm kinda familiar with it. For instance, I know that trust is pretty much the biggest foundation to it. I'm just put off by how unhappy Rainbow is with the whole thing. These relationships only work if both parties agree and consent to what's going on, and while I'm sure that's what happened when they became a couple to begin with, Fluttershy just seems to be overstepping some boundaries, forcing Rainbow to waste her precious time on inane classes. Yeah, being interrupted is annoying and rude, but that doesn't warrant behavior classes and withholding any sensuality for four months (and still controlling her sexually even after "graduating"). Fluttershy needs to remember that she's first and foremost Rainbow's girlfriend, not her taskmaster. I mean, Rainbow was terrified of answering a telephone, for heaven's sake! And she didn't calm down even when she heard that it was just Applejack, a mutual friend who Fluttershy really shouldn't have had business getting angry about (I'm not saying she did get angry about it, only that Rainbow shouldn't have been so dang worried).

That's when it hit me that Rainbow is not enjoying that relationship. She's not enjoying the submission. And after four months of getting the cold shoulder, I can't blame her. From what I've seen, Fluttershy doesn't want to be Rainbow's girlfriend; she wants to be Rainbow's master, and that's not a healthy relationship in the making. Fluttershy's behavior doesn't come off as romantic; it comes off as abusive. Why Rainbow didn't just invoke their safe word is beyond me.

I know I keep harping on about this, but I just wanted to get it out there why I feel what I feel about this story. I wouldn't be surprised if you're getting tired of reading my posts, so unless someone gives me a reason, I probably won't be going into it again. I hope my points here help out somehow.

Good luck in your future endeavors !

[Dusk Melody]

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This is not a loving consensual D/S relationship. There was no communication, Fluttershy didn't once take Rainbow's feelings into account and there was no mention whatsoever of a safe word at all. It was heavily implied that Rainbow didn't have a choice. Fluttershy takes her money, makes her feel like she doesn't belong in her own bed and tells her she's unequal.

This is just abuse.