• Member Since 13th Nov, 2016
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WonderWriter


Don't write often, but I have had an idea in mind for quite some time

Comments ( 20 )

Do another one!

...SEQUEL! We need him to fuck and fill both her and Cheerilee.

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I might do another one if the inspiration comes, I really just write whatever stuff I think of, I have tons of 500 word stories in my notepad that never took off, but I think I'd do a sequel to this.

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There was some guy lurking in my comments, then he just said "Spagett." Wasn't to spooky, just thought he couldn't spell spaghetti.

great story. I enjoyed reading it.

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I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Sequel, the pones demand

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But the ponies did not know what happens behind the curtains, for the performance was so well received, that production was already in place for another, though its arrival is still undetermined.

I approve of Pipsqueak with a massive mare-destroyer of a shaft. Well done.
Common as the ship is, I prefer the idea of him destroying Luna's plot with said shaft. If you want to do that, or if you want to ignore it, either way is fine! :rainbowwild:

HMB

Finally, somebody else does some straight shota around here

This story was like a pubescent boy masturbating. Over before it starts, utterly forgettable, and happens ten times a day. I'm sorry but I just can't get interested in a sub 2k word fic that was so obviously rushed that it wouldn't even do as a prologue to an actual story. Never mind the tense errors and otherwise garbage grammar.

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It must frustrate you that the writer got such a high upvote percentage with such little effort.
If I could pull that off I'd be... well I'd be bored, because then my stories wouldn't be nearly offensive enough.

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I honestly didn't try with the story. It wasn't meant to be some novella, just some strange story that was in my head so I decided "jot it down, release it, and if people like it, they like it." I never intended it to be even remotely long, it's a senseless piece of clop.

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I simply prefer straight stuff over gay stuff, no hetero. I guess futa/male, futa/female would be bi stuff? Partially gay, partially straight? I dunno, porn mechanics can be weird 9.6

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I noticed this fic was in the feature box, I'm hugely into foalcon, so I checked it out. I felt very disappointed with the whole fic. I don't see how giving accurate criticism on it has anything to do with its rating? But do add more ad hominen to the comments. Those will surely improve WonderWriter's writing!

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Oh I don't disagree with your criticisms. Just saying that this story has it's merits when I don't feel like reading a whole short story and just want to flick it to a quickie. :rainbowwild:

Something about this fic is greatly disturbing... what the actual hell is Pip doing in the cover pic? Is he eating spaghetti? Why does it look like hair? Why is the stuff on his face brown?

Holy hot dayum, loved it! ❤️

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