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Oatsy


I'm some sad loser who only reads stories about girls spearing guys open.

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Thumbs up from me, even if I really dont like rape and non-con,

7775851 I appreciate it and my buddy probably does more, lol. Still, unlikely to make anything like this again xD

7776138 lol k, anything I could've done to make it better or did you just dislike the kind of fic it is?

7776179 Gonna assume the latter then. Carry on, bud.

Kudos for writing it. Dunno why you being downvoted, Cocknie Thug writes way more dark and rapey stuff than you and gets upvoted. At least you get thumbs up from me.

7776249 spazibas, drug :3 I'm not that torn up over the downvotes, as I figure they're just inevitable.

7776260 Всегда пожалуйста, наркотик :pinkiehappy:

7776249 There's also quite a few other uncommon or generally disliked fetishes present in the story. If the rape doesn't turn em away, the foalcon might, if that doesn't, the futa on male might, and if none of those turn the person away, there's still multicock and hyper insertion to do the job.

Even for his stories where rape is the only generally objectionable fetish present, he usually receives a good amount of downvotes.

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Dunno, I normally dislike futa-on-male, but when it's coupled with foalcon-Spike it's very fun to read. Huge cocks I can write off as some magic stuff, something I never could with human stories. Most of all, I like it because story is about rape and it works fairly well as rape scenario where victim is coaxed into sex and rapist maintains delusion of it being consensual. Really love stories about that, but sadly they are rarity.

7776275 I'm glad someone else feels the same way~ Truthfully, I more wanted it to be more just that her infatuation made her mad with lust and desire and she just ruts him into oblivion, but her focusing solely on her pleasure (as much as I'd like that) didn't seem completely in line with the premise of her wanting to reward Spike for staying by her, so, it was decided that her misreading his signals would be a workaround to just making her a rapist for rape's sake. Had the nice side effect of falling in line with this paradigm.

Welp. That's a thing that happened.

7776489 yeeap, probably not the greatest start to proving I'm eligible for auto approval xD

Before I read, What is the Dark tag for ?

7776569 There are warnings in the description but since you asked: Spike unwillingly takes a hard dicking from Pinkie Pie.

7776582 So... sex, but he doesn't want

The demon of dank memes

7776519

Probably not.

On the topic of the story though, it does leave on an extremely bleak note. What becomes of Spike and Pinkie after this?

7776679 Funnily enough, Ghillie mentioned that back when we were writing it.
I believe he joked about Pinkie getting carted off to jail. I think I joked about them living happily ever after...in the sugarcube corner basement. Well, mostly Pinkie was happy.

Really, I think it's just left up to reader/best left out of the story.

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Bad ends for everyone!

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How exactly does that work out? x3

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Spike is broken, Rainbow is traumatized, and Pinkie lives forever on in her mental bizarro world.

7776822 I mean, that could still be good end for Pinkie. :3

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Unfortunately.

7776838 *snickers*

7776844

Fite me :U

7777219

Probably for the best.

Alternate alternate ending

Upon returning home, Pinkie is greeted by Spike, just not the way she expected.
"Pinkie, we need to talk."
"Spike? Did I do something wrong? YOU'RE NOT BREAKING UP WITH ME, ARE YOU!?"
"Pinkie, we were never together. You misinterpreted me hugging you as flirting with you and by the time it got too uncomfortable for me to handle it, I was being throatfucked."
"Wait, are you saying..."
"You were raping me all night."
"Oh."
"Yeah."
"So... make-up sex?"
"...we're setting up safewords. And please tell me those potions aren't permanent."
"YAY!"

7778231 see that's what I would've liked to make initially, but that wasn't the kind of story requested of me lol. I had planned to make two versions of the fic at one point but ended up not bothering with the 'nice' version. For all it's worth, my other story 'toned n boned' is basically what this story's other half would be, only with anthro Gilda instead of feral pinkie.

[Poor, Lucky] Spike. :derpytongue2:

7778741 Definitely not poor, that money shot at the end set him for life.

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Pls don't tell me Gilda raped Spike, too. I loved their relationship

7779017 No, originally the plan for this fic was to have a dark/ rapey version, and a more romantic/less one-sided relationship version. He was saying the gilda fic was basically the light version.

7779017 pretty much what rdo said. This fic was supposed to have two chapters, one being the story you see now whereas the other would be a totally consensual and heartfelt variant of the same story. However, I got lazy, and I was so done with this story once I finished the dark version, so I was saying that my Gilda x Spike fic might as well be the counter part to this story... despite it not even being remotely the same premise lol

Do you think you might be able to do a sequel where pinky offers her friends some of her special muffins as an apology for ever thinking they wanted to stop being friends.

7784513 While creative, probably not. I just really don't like this fic and I'm most likely not going to write a continuation of it or something similar to it ever again. If the mood strikes anyone else to write a sequel for this story, you have full permission to do so, I'll even link people to it from here. I'm not gonna be the one to make such a thing though.

It sucks that Spike didn't enjoy it, but I sure as hell did! Besides the rape, this is exactly the kind of femdom scenario I wish would befall him more often.

7824496 iunno, maybe This? It's got oversized anthro futa Gilda on Spike and even more ludicrous amounts of spooge heh. Spike really does need more love :3

Comment posted by reversalmushroom deleted Jan 3rd, 2018

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I mean, I'd love to, but I'm not sure how'd I'd believably keep Pinkie oblivious to how he feels for an entire extra chapter.

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Good-ish news. I've decided to probably do a Maud x Spike story in a similar vein as a spiritual successor

Expect it to drop probably sometime in 2020 lol

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I've decided to probably do a Maud x Spike story in a similar vein as a spiritual successor

You got my interest.
Might as well have him go through all the Pie family too.

Expect it to drop probably sometime in 2020 lol

Counting down the days

Quite a feisty and kinky little piece of smutt. I liked it but I felt it too aggressively written. Anyway, nice work.

8959774
It's 2020
Now to countdown the months.

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