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>Aged-up
>Spike
>Gay-homo-fag
>Anthro
I don't think I need to say any more.
Damn, this looked so promising... but then, anthro.
Not a fan of anthro but still good
Slow down a bit. Right now, it's difficult to follow who is doing what where. Give us some more descriptions, slow down a little, and I think you'll do fine!
And on a personal note: Aw. I've seen this picture before too, and I had so hoped Snips and Snails would get a role in a story inspired by it, seeing as how they are 1) Ponyville's resident wannabe magicians and 2) CMC shippable.
Oh well. Maybe for the future...
UPDATE!!!!! i require one at top speed
Where, in the world is. CARMEN SANDIEGO?!!
I rather liked this. Not half bad. I'm not so sure about the part with Sweetie Belle running to the storage room and all, but that's probably just me. It was explained a bit later, but still. Just a little odd. Otherwise I'd love to see more.
I like this lol. Don't listen to the other people Lucky... they just don't understand how amusing something fucked up like this is.
3267987 Aged up, because I do not and never will write foalcon. Spike wasn't the first choice, but he made it. And what bit is gay, exactly? Or do you mean me?
3268121 Can I safely assume that you don't like humanized stories as well? Oh well, every one has their opinion, and you're free to state yours, so thanks.
3268289 Thanks, hopefully I can keep you interested.
3268327 I may have done some small bits, but I'm still pretty inexperienced with clop writing. This is my second one focusing on the subject, and where I hope to improve.
Oh, they may turn up just yet. Still as losers, but... well, you'll just have to wait and see.
3268437 Patience, young padawan. Good things cum to those who wait.
3268652 Certainly not here right. (I have no idea what you're talking about.)
3268852 Well, she wouldn't have if they were left alone, but sucking your boyfriends cock whilst his 'big sister' and your friend's older brother are there? That is some kinky shit. I like it.
3268989 Thanks Fatty. The main thing I don't understand is the anti-anthro. It makes the whole subject of this story easier to write about, and lets me use a plethora of positions.
3268852
HELLO ONCE AGAIN!!
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Yeah, FIGHT THAT PEDOPHILIA!
I'm probably about to read this, but I do have a question (not that it affects whether or not I read it, I'm just curious)... in the description, you state:
The trio were on their way home from the carnival show when they had the idea to intimate the last act.
Was that a typo, did you mean "initiate" or "imitate"? Or did you purposefully use the word "intimate" to make a joke... since sexual shit is often associated with the word "intimate"...? And don't worry about what Valvatorez said. anyone who talks like >this is obviously just trying to troll, while testing their subject for recognition of traditional 4chan greentext syntax.
3269586 Firstly, well at least the first comment is cleared up now. I've not been on that site... ever.
Secondly... autocorrect is total bollocks. Yeah, meant to be imitate. Will go fix it now, thanks.
3269592 Just finished reading. Interesting character portrayal. More words in the right places could probably enhance the story a bit, but it was good as it was. (though do try to avoid "i'm gonna cum" type declarations, it feels unrealistic, and breaks the story's potential) Just my suggestions, but it was still a pretty good fic.
and... don't let the first comment ruin a potential opportunity. 4chan has its place. A nice change from things like facebook, in my opinion. You just have to... know the culture. (hate is accepted/encouraged and not to be taken too seriously, and NEVER, FOR ANY REASON do something that someone on 4chan tells you to do, unless you already know what will result. (else you might end up in the hospital due to mustard gas exposure or something) ) There's even an mlp board. (see this first, though: http://www.ted.com/talks/christopher_m00t_poole_the_case_for_anonymity_online.html )
3269704 Yeah, I'm still relatively inexperienced at writing clop, so this is where I hope to improve.
And it's not over yet!
3269528
Hey, it's alright! As I said, just a bit of polish and you're all set.
This new chapter looks really good, for instance. I like it!
And between you and me (and the rest of FimFiction), I ship them with Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara anyhow ^^ And look, at least Spoony is free now. You could always have those two bit- I mean, ladies - try and outshine the Crusaders, by getting some 'professional help' from the S&S magic act. And if they suddenly find that they like being helpless... fun all around!
3269528 I like the idea as well, but I more meant how it was handled. We weren't told that they were dating until after they were caught, so it just seemed like Sweetie was being weird. Like I said, it's likely just me to find it odd. I'm always being weird, after all. But there again, it just seemed weird because of the lack of context.
Ummm....yes I do want Scootaloo's real father because it will most likely help her clean up her act. Just my two cents
3270484 Hmm... that's not a bad idea... I may have to use that.
3270537 Ah, got you now! Heh, I'm going for the same ships as in one of my favourites. See if you can work out which one!
Bit rough in the edges but so far very enjoyable :)
3270549 Well then, you see, in chapter... I've already said too much. You've gotta hide me before they catch up!!
3270632 Yeah... I'm not the best writer out there, so as long as my ideas get across, then I think I've done my job.
3269528 The story itself. Also, they are still underage, so it's still technically pedophilia. And it isn't foalcon because they are shitty anthro, not ponies.
3271076 As it says in the description, the legal age for consenting sex in the United Kingdom, where I live, is 16, therefore they are not underage. Personally, I think those who do write paedophilia stories should not be allowed to, as it is a disgusting thing.
As for not liking anthro... well, that's your choice, and you are welcome to it, same as your opinion on the story. I prefer to hear as many points of view as possible, provided that they are explained as to why. Which you have now done, so thanks for that.
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But on a more serious note... everywhere? I was sure they were just in my A/N...
Also, more will come, but as it's 0148 for me, I'm off for some sleep.
is sweetie bell going to go through the whole story with that straight jacket on
3274890 Damn, and I thought I was kinky!! But... I don't think so. I don't plan on this being an overnight/weekend thing, so probably not. After all, Rarity would like to see them for a talk afterwards, and she wants them presentable... though I suppose it it's clean, she could wear it to the chat...
Although, I may keep her in it for quite an extended period of time at some point. Out of the three, she's going to be the most kinky. Helps that her dragon/coltfriend is older enough to go into the shop and buy stuff.
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Well, if you do, I'm going to be a very happy Derpsby! ^^
After all, Bondage for the Diamond and Silver Mares is fun!
Also, it's fun to see how authors pair them up!
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At first I didn't, but then I lol'd. Just writing the Slutaloo scene right now... but I should get to them soon... if I do that.
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please do something with latex in the story
3275347 I'm sure you've noticed that I'm putting pictures of where my ideas come from in my A/N...
Notice that there one character tag who haven't arrived yet? Give time. Oh, and No.4 is almost ready.
Just got some fluff to finish off and then to editing it goes.
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i think this guys art is what i would like to see in the story (link)
(p.s i am hunter117x i just uses i different name here)
3275430 Heh, I've seen all of them, and like I said, you'll have to wait.
Thunderlane or Soarin?
3275770
Try again. Non canon character, so it all depends on whether you have seen the piece of fan art that inspired the idea.
Given him an OC name as well, so that makes it even harder. Introduced next chapter though... huh, 1500 words in and no clop yet.
Yeah, guess how he's going to meet Pip...
Hmm...with the way she said 'oh my' like that, it's someone she would never have expected...
Possibilities...Discord, Blueblood, Dash Sr. (whoever Rainbow's father is), a griffon, Garble, Philomena, OC.
3275815 I had actually considered Blueblood at one point... but I like what I've got so far. After 1500 words with no clop, I needed to add some in, as this is meant to be a clop fic. Not all bondage/bdsm though, will be some vanilla bits.
But yeah, Pip is not going to make a good impression on him.Dash is not related to her in this one... which makes a change for me!
3275836
Wait...are you saying Scoot's real father is going to walk in on them going at it?
3275952 Maybe... sort of... it won't be his fault.
After all, she is kinda SLUTaloo at this point.
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I'm actually enjoying the story here more than the clop.
3275972 Really? Cool, especially as it doesn't really have a plot to drive it. Just trying to give this story some depth.
I mean, yeah, it's got plots, but no plot to follow.
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It feels very episodic. We've got Rarity coming to terms with how far Spike and Sweetie have gone, we've got the Apples dealing with AB and Rumble, we've got Scootaloo's difficult home life and how it's effected her, and now we've got Pip trying to save her from it, along with Luna's help.
Of course, with Pip saying she's his favorite Princess now, I have a sudden mental image of Scootaloo sprouting a horn without warning.
3275984 Heh, that's a reference to one of my favourite series on the site. There's usually something in my stories about them. This one is mainly the couples.
And who do you think told Spike how to please a mare? After they talked about his crush, he told her about the one he had on her sister as well. After a lengthy discussion between the pair and Twilight, he chose to persue the younger mare. It's no wonder that he's kept her with those two giving him pointers.
3276093
Ah, I see. Is that what happened? Interesting.
This is a wonderful story I have enjoyed every thing about it so far.
3276587 Even the non clop bits?
3276631 Yes every little bit of the story I love it all just love it.
Firefly?
You do know most of the fandom thinks Firefly (the G1 pony) is Rainbow's Mom, right? (Not hushing. Also, called it.)
3276649 Can't it? his daughter is there, and half naked. That's enough to break anyone's concentration.
3276652 Cool.
3276682 Heh, you should check out my other stories then, I have her as both Scoot's and Dash's mother.
Decided with no relation between them this time. Well, direct, anyway. Maybe a cousin or something.
And did you now? I may have somepony else in mind... and something different planned for them... you'll just have to wait and see.
Dude...
RUN!!!
3276812 Pegaus guard vs earth pony. He might as well just stand still, no chance of surviving like that.
Thankfully... ScootaBoob is there.
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Ignore the bra and gun.