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Thanks for Coming In! | Retired

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A mansion has appeared in the middle of the Everfree, commanding the spirits of all those within its confines, and setting them upon those who dare near the woods. The Elements Bearer's have been sent to investigate and have yet to return.

Spike goes looking for them.

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Another piece of drivel I was too lazy to edit, lola.

But it was a good story going through my spine (Shifers)

Everything was fine, until the author decided to wake up at three A.M and do the following:

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Seriously the following passage I am about to quote ruined the entire story. Up until this point, the grammar, syntax, and story was okay. But then, this happened.

Spike looked at the painting to see Sombra. Oh nO! He says he will make the six painting of the six, who bang depsartly to get out, into treaued souls to regain his power. He asks the draek why he doesn’t jsut grow in size, but spike know the ghost will take over his mindlessness

Sombras asks if he has the courage to make it through the terros of the manson all by himelf.

Spike says he does, sucks up the ghosts, and makes way fro the next room.

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My bad broski.

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So now that I can see that I have your attention, are you going to fix it?

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Don't really have the time to edit the plethora a drivel I posted.

Sorry mate.

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