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I need more time to write (this is my Ko-fi just in case you want to support me)

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The savior of the Crystal Empire is known for rejecting the romantic approaches of the crystal mares. Unluckily for him, one of his lovestruck fans can't hold the feeling of her heart being broken.
Knowing how difficult would be to get the affection of the dragon in her own world, Pure Sapphire will travel to another one in order to put her plan into action.

Thanks to JackRipper for his help as an editor, and my most sincere apologize to him for not editing this fic sooner.

Written for the Barcast Writing Competition: Spike Must Suffer
Note: some corrections could be made in the future.
Warning: Given the purpose of the contest, this fic will contain a bad ending and could serve the reader with unhealthy amounts of impotence feelings

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Comments ( 6 )

Oh yay! Thanks for entering this in the contest, looking forward to reading it!

8234901
glad to know it. :twilightsmile:
I hope you enjoy Spike's suffering through this contest :pinkiecrazy:

Poor spike...

Song from The Doors

"This is the end 
Beautiful friend 
This is the end 
My only friend, the end 

Of our elaborate plans, the end 
Of everything that stands, the end 
No safety or surprise, the end 
I'll never look into your eyes...again"

8242969
that reminded me that I wanted to add a song before the transition to the ending scene. While Spike was dazzled with the spell

The song is hurricane from the hamilton musical

"In the eye of the hurricane there is quite~
for just a moment
in the yellow sky"

8242996
That song really works!

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