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Castok the Shadow


Humans... Humans everywhere

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Finally after one thousand years of banishment, Princess Luna has return to her true self as Princess of the Night.

However in her absent, Night Terrors ran amok through people's dreams.

So Luna not only have to deal with all these Night Terrors.

But to make a deal with their master.

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Comments ( 3 )

Nothing huh?
Know what, imma have a little read.

Not bad, could have been better, lovely premise. (Sorry for not being constructive, I do not have an eye for the specifics)

This could have been wonderful. an epic spring cleaning of sorts or luna coming back from exile to find the metaphysical roaches under the cabinets and needing to deal with them. But this feels rather rushed for you Castok Theres a good idea here. but if feels buried and unfocused by Diplomacy of all things. You have a good head for mythos ill give you that.

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