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These are a bunch of fight scene ideas that I happen to have, but the problem is, I don't know how to make a story leading up to them. So I decided why bother? So instead, I decided, meh screw it, make the fight scenes for entertainment purposes. None of the chapters are canon, so I hope you enjoy it.
If you want to make a story out of my fight scene. By all means, make it. Just be sure to let me know it inspired you.
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Very good fight scene, a tad drawn out but otherwise it was great. It would feel a but less drawn out if the fight was a but more evenly matched, after all it's cool to see someone wipe the floor with an opponent but it can be a bit boring, so having Shining Armor or Flash Sentry land a few hits on Lance would have made I seem like they had a fighting chance and weren't going to inevitably lose. Other than those minor complaints it was really fun to picture I my mind.
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Technically Shining Armor didhit Lance, it just wasn't an effective hit.
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Honestly, I wanna know what you think of Lance and Jen. Just for giggles.
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I found them to be rather funny, kind of reminded me of close siblings. Which now that I think about it would make sense.
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Really? How so? So I can do it again.
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Just the opening interaction between them, Lance refusing to talk made me think of my older brother teasing me by acknowledging me but not replying. Jen's reaction to Lance reminded me of how I reacted to it by simply trying to get him to reply but I ended up just talking without a reply. So I guess it's the interaction between them and the smile along with the attempted bribery that made me think of a sibling relationship. Really to make a character seem real I just think of how people I know would react or however I would react. Personal experience or observing others helps to create a character.
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Duly Noted. I might make a story based off of this alone.
Fun fact: Notice how they're literally opposites.
Lance: Hoof to hoof combat capability, Black exterior, Purple eyes, clothing, hind hoof usage, silent type.
Jen: Stealthy, weapon expertise, White exterior, Yellow eyes (Purple and Yellow are opposites), Front hoof usage, talkative.
The next chapter will be-
Rarity: NO SPOILERS!!
Okay Rares jeez!
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I didn't notice that, but it is pretty cool. If you do make a story based on this you can bet I'll read it. I hope you have a nice day/night and if you need anything just ask!
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Chapter 2 is here. And more evenly matched this time. Hope you enjoy.