A Not-So-Stiff Breeze 2: A Not-So-Bright Rainbow

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Tschloken

Tschloken #1 · Apr 18th, 2017 · 1 · ·

What did my eyes just read?

Jirodyne

Jirodyne #2 · Apr 26th, 2017 · 3 · ·

Two things. First, I pick option C, saying he wants both Rainbow AND Fluttershy, in their own bodies. Or better yet, Twilight gives Rainbow a cock and Zepher gets kicked out so Rainbow and Fluttershy has some fun :P

Second, is the suggestion that you set this story as the Sequel to the first one. I don't write stories, so I don't know how you do that, but I know there is an option for that somewhere. Would really help keeping a series together since you have them as different stories instead of different chapters in 1 story.

gaitiem

gaitiem #3 · Apr 26th, 2017 · · ·

8121495 You're right. I thought I had made it a sequel, but I must have done it wrong. Fixed! Thank you for pointing that out.

rainbowdashman

rainbowdashman #4 · May 20th, 2017 · · ·

I am not too sure if you are making another but I want a rainbow dash going through

Sollace

Sollace #5 · Jun 20th, 2017 · · ·

I vote A.

It's the logical next step. Zeph needs to get some payback for them tricking him.

lambda

lambda #6 · Aug 20th, 2017 · 4 · 1 ·

I hate to say this but as a sequel its a lot less impressive than the original one. Second half of this story seems really rushed, and the part where 'rainbow dash' does zephyr just because fluttershy wants her own kid is rather confusing.

Ink_Flourish