Scootaloo and Sweetie are best friends, but they've found themselves acting more and more like a couple lately. There's no way it has something to do with the mysterious potion they just drank... is there? And if there is, what does that mean for them?
The events of this story take place before those of the episode "Crusaders of the Lost Mark", so they don't have their cutie marks, and aren't friends with Diamond Tiara or Silver Spoon.
It's a clean, Novella-length Scootabelle fan fiction in 14 parts.
Here it is, in a single document with no commentary, on FanFiction, if that's your preference: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11785952/1/Potion-Panic
Chapters (15)
It's spelled 'wagon'. Interesting idea.
Hmmm interested so far ill go ahead and give this a like and favorite.
6718294 I looked it up, and it can be wagon or waggon. Auto-correct doesn't agree with me, but google does. Thanks for your imput, though, I definitely want criticism to help me improve.
Hmm... I'll keep an eye on this...
Eh the AJ is a homophobe trope is subverted more often than not nowadays, least that I've seen. It kinda shifted to Granny Smith but even that's faded.
6721080 Ah, sorry. And awesome chapter.
6721190 Good to know.
6721488 Thank you!
6724051 You're welcome! And I'm loving how fast the chapters are coming out!
Holy shit, that was actually an amazing plot twist... good show!
6746801 Thank you!
Not bad, can't wait for more ^^
Theory: Apple Bloom diluted the love poison enough that it became a safe love potion
If this is correct, wow. Only one way to find out.
Called It!!!
Wait, It does WHAT, in the after effects?
That was a great ending to a nice fic. Great job.
6776751 Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
Well, it seems like the story could use a little reformatting. Other than that, though, I'm liking it. I'll check it out tomorrow when I wake up!
6829339 What kind of reformatting?
Great story. Scootabelle is best ship and i love seeing it done so well.
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Thank you
Well thanks for that. It's not like I didn't know
NO BAD PARENTS!
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Was not expecting to see discord
Oh luna
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Ooh, sorry. I suppose I should have spoilered that. Fixed! Thanks for pointing it out.
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it's fine I saw it just as I found this story and I thought I would let you know
As I was reading this, the one thing I was thinking was, 'Wow, Death is cool.' Then Princess Luna reveals herself as Death. IMPOSTER!
This made no sense, at least the court part. Apple Bloom was innocent to begin with unless a permit of handling potions is a legal requirement. As far as I see it, Apple Bloom is the victim as she did nothing wrong because how could she when wasn't even present during when Scootaloo and Sweetie Bell took the potion. It should've been Scootaloo and Sweetie Bell that should be on the stand for misusing the substance whether it'd be intentional or not.
Now if that was the case, the court hearing wouldn't go in their favour because as Luna said they needed at least two witnesses to testify. Since they is only one, Apple Bloom, they are screwed unless Twilight decides to be kind on the matter.
“‘At the clubhouse’?” Sweetie questioned. “What good is that to you now? I can’t let you scoot me to school without a helmet on! This isn’t a cartoon, you know!”
Yeah, you tell her SB! There's no way you two are actually ponies that were drawn by a cartoonist and used for a TV show that this very story is based off if. Absolutely no way!
Pretty sure it's "Sweetie and me".
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Oh yeah, you're right. I'll keep it as it is, though. I can just say Pinkie Pie got it wrong, lol. Thank you