Guarded Emotions: Burying the Past

TGuarded Emotions: Old Ties
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Drama
On the eve of the Equestria Friendship Festival, Moonwhisper and Shining Armor are called by the Cutie Map to a remote corner of Equestria for a friendship mission.
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Alabenson · 27k words · 13 0 · 526 views
THow Pinkie Pie "Saved" Hearth's Warming
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Slice of Life
Pinkie Pie has takes it upon herself to show Moonwhisper the true meaning of Hearth's Warming Eve, and nothing will stop her. Not even the fact that he already likes Hearth's Warming.
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Discord
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Alabenson · 8.1k words · 170 views

This story is a sequel to Guarded Emotions

Twilight Sparkle and Moonwhisper have been dating for some time now, and their relationship has been slowly progressing. However, the shadow of Moonwhisper's past looms over everything, and for every victory over Moonwhisper's past that Twilight achieves it seems like there's another horror waiting for her to discover.

Chapters (8)

Moving Day · 8th Apr 2017 · 6,246 words
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Rodeo Reconciliation · 21st May 2017 · 8,878 words
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To the Crystal Empire · 1st Jul 2017 · 7,672 words
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A Family Meeting · 15th Jul 2017 · 4,608 words
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Schedule Conflicts · 19th Aug 2017 · 5,870 words
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Trotsylvania · 15th Oct 2017 · 10,362 words
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An Unwelcome Arrival · 5th Nov 2017 · 5,387 words
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Get Out! · 2nd Dec 2017 · 6,334 words
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Onyx Quill

Onyx Quill #1 · Aug 17th, 2017 · 3 · · A Family Meeting ·

How does this not have more views? It's a solid story. I didn't like Moonwhisper in the first series, but he's growing on me now.

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Onyx Quill #2 · Aug 19th, 2017 · 2 · · Schedule Conflicts ·

LOL great chapter. Love Twi's grandma.

Bluecatcinema

Bluecatcinema #3 · Aug 20th, 2017 · 2 · · Schedule Conflicts ·

Starry Night is a really good character. She really made this chapter. Although I did enjoy this line:

“Princess of Friendship with Benefits,”

Onyx Quill

Onyx Quill #4 · Oct 18th, 2017 · 1 · · Trotsylvania ·

Another pretty solid chapter. I wish it would get more views.

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Onyx Quill #5 · Nov 6th, 2017 · · · An Unwelcome Arrival ·

“Probably not, Silver Streak admitted, “at least not any earth ponies or pegasi. Supposedly Penumbral Dusk is actually capable of being pleasant when he’s dealing with other unicorns, but I can’t even imagine the sort of narcissistic moron you’d have to be to not see right through him.”

*Me reading that part*: Author's gonna throw Trixie in here I bet. She definitely fits the "narcissistic moron" description.

*Scrolls down*

“- and that is how the Great and Powerful Trixie rescued the captured princesses from the clutches of Queen Chrysalis!”

Me: Wow. Totally called it.

Onyx Quill

Onyx Quill #6 · Nov 22nd, 2017 · 1 · · A Family Meeting ·

“Well, to be honest it would be more accurate to say that it wasn’t entirely what it looks like,” Moonwhisper mused out loud. “I suppose it would be more accurate to say that this was approximately half of what it looked like; two-thirds of what it looked like at most.” Twilight shot Moonwhisper an annoyed glance as she finally got herself free of the sheets.

Smooth, Moonwhisper. Very smooth.

manacar

manacar #7 · Dec 2nd, 2017 · · · Get Out! ·

Good two stories this one and the one before it

aline1

aline1 #8 · Dec 2nd, 2017 · · · Get Out! ·

There is something cathartic about Penumbral Dusk knocked about then getting put in his place.

Bluecatcinema

Bluecatcinema #9 · Dec 3rd, 2017 · · · Get Out! ·

Great ending. Penumbral Dusk really got what he deserved.

Onyx Quill

Onyx Quill #10 · Dec 3rd, 2017 · · · Get Out! ·

Yikes. I have to admit it was rather satisfying seeing Twilight kick Dusk's sorry ass.

Onyx Quill

Onyx Quill #11 · Dec 4th, 2017 · · · Get Out! ·

I REALLY like how Moonwhisper has changed over the two stories. Solid character development.

Onyx Quill

Onyx Quill #12 · Dec 14th, 2017 · · · Get Out! ·

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He was very anti-social and closed off in the first series. He's gone from that to still-not-all-sunshine-and-bunnies, but showing a sense of humor and a lighter side. Opening up a bit. It's a very believable change.

manacar