Quietshy is a young filly like the other girls of her age and very shy but she has a secret, she is the apprentice of the famous Daring Do. Whenever she needs her, Quiety becomes Miss Whistler, her alter ego and she goes to explore temples, dungeons, tombs to find treasure of past and take them in the present.
During an exploration. Daring Do and Miss Whisper meet the Keeper of the Harmony Stones. But because of their confrontations with Caballeron, the stones scatter across Equestria.
The two explotatrice in front of recovering them.
Chapters (6)
This is a very interesting concept. Try to rewrite it in present tense and add more detail. What does the temple look like? What does it smell like? Feel like?
Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?
Disabling the like and dislike feature just goes to show you can't stand looking at the little red and green thumbs up and thumbs down that has numbers next to it, perhaps if so many people disliked it you could try rewriting it, but never disable ratings as that makes people skip it by default because that's the sign of an author who can't take any sort of criticism regardless of how small or large it is