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What would happen if Queen Chrysalis had been victorious? What would happen if Cadnce really was her true self?
Find out the answers in TWO short stories with TWO different Alternate Universes.
(Note: This is my first time I present TWO stories as one.)
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This story is far too fast-paced. It's more like a rough draft or an outline than an actual story. You have all sorts of grammar mistakes, too, such as having paragraphs that contain dialogue from more than one character. I suggest you read the official FiMFiction writing guide. That is a very helpful resource that explains pretty much everything you need to know.