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Horizon Spark


Writing My Little Pony stories for you so I can one day become an amazing author! Please comment and tell me what you think.

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Comment posted by Blade Striker deleted Jan 7th, 2017

Great job mate. Hopefully we see a sequel in the near future.

If anyone/anypony has any ideas on how to improve this story, by all means, share it with us. ^_^

SEQUEL!! SEQUEL!! Come on everyone! SEQUEL!! SEQUEL!!

More!
Cadence/Shining/Chrysalis is a hot threesome

And the Dynamic of an accepted Shining/Chrysalis pair up is just too good to ass up!

7855815 Any reasons why you want it? Come on, we want some constructive criticism.

That was nice. Good to see Chryssie doing better. And the Sexy times were great, too. I love this pairing, Chryssie Cadance and Shining all together.

One note, I think something's missing here: 'He licked his lips as'

FLANK IS NOT ASS! FLANK MEANS SIDE! THIS IS BASIC FUCKING ANATOMY! GYAAARG

...was giving Chrysalis’s marehood a good rub.

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