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Comments ( 9 )

Oh, I like this. Looking forward to more.

I am of the opinion that having a shapeshifter turn into you as the opposite sex is still selfcest.

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I think it's debatable at least, but I'm inclined to agree

Damn, that was good. :D Shiny, you lucky son of a gun.

Glorious beyond words...

I humbly request that more is written.

I see Gleaming is a kinky bitch.:raritywink:

Great as always, Mister Chapter.

When you can never find the images

she could keep the prince to himself

herself

rolled into her back

unto

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------ Review ------

Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-Fairly short and straighforward, but it still manages to be pretty hot.
-And I do love me some open marriage Cadance.
-The blowjob part was awfully short, though -- they could have spent more time on foreplay.
-You did a very interesting comparison for his R63 version's body type. Good job on making it not necessarily the ideal of sexiness, but instead carrying over some of Shining's characteristics into a female form.

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Cloppability: 85/100
Allure: 70/100
Enticement: 89/100
Immersion: 90/100
Prose Quality: 92/100
Total Score: 426/500
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