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Oh, I like this. Looking forward to more.
I am of the opinion that having a shapeshifter turn into you as the opposite sex is still selfcest.
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I think it's debatable at least, but I'm inclined to agree
Damn, that was good. :D Shiny, you lucky son of a gun.
Glorious beyond words...
I humbly request that more is written.
I see Gleaming is a kinky bitch.
Great as always, Mister Chapter.
When you can never find the images
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-Fairly short and straighforward, but it still manages to be pretty hot.
-And I do love me some open marriage Cadance.
-The blowjob part was awfully short, though -- they could have spent more time on foreplay.
-You did a very interesting comparison for his R63 version's body type. Good job on making it not necessarily the ideal of sexiness, but instead carrying over some of Shining's characteristics into a female form.
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Cloppability: 85/100
Allure: 70/100
Enticement: 89/100
Immersion: 90/100
Prose Quality: 92/100
Total Score: 426/500
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