Luna has a depressing nightmare.
Set before the events of the show.
"I wan't to be someone who can make everyone around me smile, someone people can lean on when they're feeling a little down and out."-Asuna
Luna has a depressing nightmare.
Set before the events of the show.
It was good
Nicely done. Just a few technical errors.
Good story
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Try and use comma's in your story. For instance, instead of this:
try this:
Also, in this line:
I think you meant "cold" instead of "cooled"
I thought this was pretty good, a prelude to what will happen to poor Luna.