Poor Vs. The Rich

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Plymouth Superbird

Plymouth Superbird #1 · Dec 17th, 2016 · 2 · 1 ·

Awe yea man its finally hear.
As always love your stuff man

Sk1Tz

Sk1Tz #2 · Dec 17th, 2016 · 2 · ·

I dont know why I'm here, but I give every story a chance, and this story fails, simply because the author is too damn lazy and rushed that they copy and paste the same paragraph twice. Its unforgivable that you can't be bothered of making an original paragraph.

McProky

McProky #3 · Dec 17th, 2016 · · 3 ·

7800533 What, really? I guess the proofreader forgot to delete that :D

McProky

McProky #4 · Dec 17th, 2016 · · 2 ·

Wow, this fic is the most hated one, cool :D I wonder why... :D

gigglesthen00b

gigglesthen00b #5 · Dec 17th, 2016 · 3 · 1 ·

Nice trollfic (not really, this is lazy af)

McProky

McProky #6 · Dec 17th, 2016 · · 2 ·

7800661 How so? Why is it trollfic? What even is a trollfic? :D

HHHGREGG

HHHGREGG #7 · Dec 17th, 2016 · · ·

triq267

triq267 #8 · Dec 17th, 2016 · 2 · ·

8/10, would get slightly aroused again

McProky

McProky #9 · Dec 17th, 2016 · · 1 ·

7800789 That is....cool...

Hclegend

Hclegend #10 · Dec 17th, 2016 · 2 · 2 ·

7800661 How is it a trollfic? Why does it fail? Do you just not like the story because it didn't get you off?

You could always you know, try and give criticism instead of being all "I didn't like this, hur dur." I don't expect an essay, but if I was the author, I'd expect an actual criticism rather than a buzzword to discredit the author.

Then again you haven't even written a story, so you wouldn't understand the concept of giving criticism.

Oh and author, I rate 8/8, don't let the h8 get you down, m8. It got me off at least.

McProky

McProky #11 · Dec 17th, 2016 · 1 · 2 ·

7801057 Well, thanks for standing up for me. Though, I expected the "trollfic" behavior on this site, since so many people complained that this place is bad for this time of fics.

Stil though, I am quite confused as to why this have so much hate? I think it is because I put it into the group which's owner is my ex-proofreader, who ditched me halfway through this story :D

Hclegend