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Haven't read the original yet, but it's one of the next things on my list. Definitely following this!
Ferb, I know what we're gonna do today!
I LOVED the first one, so I'm very interested to see how the sequel pans out...
Applejack's got such a cute filly. I'm gonna call her Dende.
6465036 I see what you did there.
Greatly enjoyed the other one. Now let's see were this one goes: tracked and liked.
Don't worry Tiara... Having experienced a similar situation, I'd have done the EXACT same thing... (Or rather, wish I had in hindsight)
Nice chapter BTW.
Ouch ... really feeling bad for Diamond here ... can't blame her for taking a good thwack at her mom. And Suri's her mom? Yeah, I can see that. I think her reaction is a large part of why he delayed serving her papers.
Oh, and I'm half hoping that Filthy winds up with Rarity or maybe Sunset Shimmer (dunno why, but I like that crack pairing).
You made me feel sorry for DIAMOND TIARA. Most impressive, quite literally no other fic has ever made me do that. Granted, this DT is a lot nicer than the bullying brat we know from the show, so, yeah, that's, that. Good chapter.
I knew it! HA! I knew Suri was Di's mom! Suspected it since it was first mentioned that her mother went to Manehatten to pursue a fashion career and was a b*tch! I'm so smart
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stop giving me those annoyed looks...
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whatever
~love, Nightjar
Nice chapter, but there's a couple things you may want to edit.
That should be "pests".
And that shouldn't be capitalized.
You.
...
That's fair.
Aww, no accidental walk-in foursome.
Dinky, is turned on, by the idea of so much violence, OK then.
True, she only use her skills as a gard for spying ponies having sex.
Blueblood. Also, the return of Aura, as insufferable as ever.
so Aura became a Merc? quite a step down...most Merc companies dont exactly have the capital necessary for up to date equipment unless they r very good and get government endorsement, and even then, they tend not to maintain their equipment tot he same standard as professional soldiers.
Nice chapter, but there's a minor thing you may want to edit.
That should be "as".
Blueblood hiring mercs, and has been at least spreading rumors about replacing the Guard with them? NOT good. Doubly so if he's hiring the likes of Aura.
Still feel bad for Aura. Diamond Tiara basically made her life living hell, and ever since she's been capable of getting some payback she's just been the idiot-ball antagonist for this series.
Changeling, calling it now.
Oh, now it going to be fun.
Well that's f*cking ominous.
6610615
I agree.
Well now... Even though this intreages (sp- darn spell correct fail) me the dream... scares me some. I'm really really really hoping she doesn't loose a leg to frostbite.....
A wild plot device appears! (I love the internet for giving me the chance to make a reference to something I know virtually nothing about!)
Whatever it is, I'm psyched!
I'm not sure if I said it already, but I really enjoy your writing style!
~Nightjar
It's a changeling. Kill it!
6563160 It depends on the period and the economy. Equestria is so schizotech and vague on military matters that any given writer can drop it into any given American/European period, although I don't think I've seen anyone do American Civil War or Napoleonic/post-Westphalean. But we have seen (This Platinum Crown) Renaissance settings where mercenaries were the primary source of military engineers and artillerymen, both being *exceedingly* capital-intensive aspects of their milieu. On the other end of the spectrum you have Equestria’s Changeling Queen and the Abyssal Empress, where we're clearly in the equivalent of late Victorian/Edwardian period complete with dreadnaughts and large tax-and-trade-fueled professional navies, and mercenaries are only a factor among pirates and criminals. Given the deliberate modern aspects of the military culture in this particular fic, I'd wager that we're looking at the current contemporary situation, where various factors have been driving western militaries towards professionalization in general and mercenary group reformation in particular in the American context. Especially SS's point about the parasitization of the PMCs on government-operated training programs.
Yes, that does generally tend to end poorly.
Ooohh, poor Tiara. Hey, Crystal Heart, I think she could use a little consolation.
And the bloody death on the Bloodcrystals will of course have no consequences whatsoever.
This is why you should listen to divine artifacts of unimaginable power and wisdom. If they tell you not to do something or go somewhere DON'T GO THERE AND DON'T DO THE THING.
Hubris, I fucking swear.
Also, I guess guard-training didn't include lessons on how to deal with taking a life. You really think they would.
Brutal.
...
I had to
This can't end well. Even if Chrissie is surrendering in good faith, which I rather doubt, her being in close proximity to the Heart could turn into about eight different kinds of bad.
I getcha.
Eh?
She's having gun already.
Admiral Ackbar please?
Oh dear.
Sombra + Crysalis ? So where is Hope now ?
I'm still calling on those blood crystals! Though the reason for Sombra (if it's really him) is probably his horn. I mean, that's kinda a trope.
See what happens Diamond, bully most your life and then karma reminds you of your debt.
Don't tempt fate.
YouR CO.
Really?
I suppose. However, let's be real, if you screw with time, things start going to hell. Isn't that right Starlight?
Well played.
Seriously?
It's Aura isn't it?
Don't know, haven't found a world without magic.
The most believable outcome of the fight. But you know what, I will still bet on Diamond. Unleash your inner brat girl.
This fight will be more a mental battle than a physical one. Diamond has that down or Dinky wouldn't have suggested bringing out her inner brat. Yet considering their first bout during training, Diamond better not soak up too much damage on the physical end either or she's screwed. I'm very eager to see how this goes.
Lesson number 1 in fighting: Noone wins in a headbutt.
*groan* That was terrible!
You really think she's gonna buy that?
Clever girl.
She so didn't say Applebloom the first time. Something is wrong with her head, maybe a concussion or a lasting effect of changeling poison/magic.
6752875 the first thing she said
the second thing she said
there is the difference and what confused Dinky and Rumble
it looks like this attacker, is attacking the mind over the body, striking at Ponys deepest fears...though only when alone...it would make sense, as that is when the victim would be most vulnerable to their fears...
6754763 i was thinking the same thing last chapter, this just confirms it.