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BookyBrony


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takes place before the season 5 finale

Each of them visited Princess Twilight Sparkle for their own reasons, one doing so uninvited. But when a challenge is made and magic accidents occur, these three strangers will need to become friends with each other as well as make new friends in the strange world they've come to if they want to make it back alive.

Will they make it back safely?

Will they survive the dangers of Everglow?

Will Everglow survive them?

At least the last one is very likely.


This is a story taking place mostly in the Ponyfinder setting of Pathfinder.
Pathfinder is a table top rpg, very much in the same vein as Dungeons and Dragons. There is even a Ponyfinder made for 5th edition of D&D if you're interested.
Ponyfinder itself belongs to David Silver, who is also an extremely active writer on here, and has written several stories in the Ponyfinder setting himself. For sanity's sake, this is in a different Canon.

I am slightly disappointed that there is no tag for Moondancer.

Cover art by Luxury Yacht

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 15 )

Hey! I like this story, can you do me a favor and help me edit my one-shot story named Enter The Forest, it's about the mane six getting lost in the everfree forest and they meet a village of ponies. they quickly found out that the village is cannibals, and the village kills them.

7767224 if you want to find an editor, there's most likely groups for that. Go ask them there instead of in his story.

7767354
excuse me i was asking the author not you, but if you insist

You have a good concept, but you need an editor. Some initial advice is to not split the fic into so many sections and paragraphs. Also, add to groups for exposure.

7767224
I'm not an editor, so I have to say no.

Intriguing. :twilightsmile:

I look forward to the next installment of Trixie Lulamoon's Fantastic Adventure! :trixieshiftright:

It's not just your adventure, Trixie... :facehoof:

Yes! Another thrilling installment of the Adventures of the Great and Powerful Trixie! :trixieshiftleft:

Trixie! I already told you, this story is not all about you! :twilightangry2:

Well, who else would it be about? You're hardly in this chapter at all! :trixieshiftright:

:facehoof:

Will nightmares appear or at least be mentioned in this story? I'm not talking about Nightmare Moon, I'm talking about these guys.

Those darn portals... This is the second time one has sucked poor Sunset off to Everglow. She must be getting ticked off.

I'm mildly confused at Trixie's lack of third person at times. So, is this in the same 'universe' as other such crossovers? I presume not.

7789844
She doesn't always speak in third person, only when she's confident or trying to act confident.

Iron Shield: "I once killed a dragon in my pajamas."

Trixie: "Why was the dragon wearing your pajamas?" :trixieshiftright:

:facehoof:

Nice start, can't wait to read more.

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