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Sparrow9642


I'm a proud brony who reads stuff for a living. I also write darkfics & family-friendly stuff every-so-often. All I can say is, if you plan to read any of my content, happy horrors ;)

Comments ( 9 )

That ending was very sweet. I don't think this story needs a sad tag at all.

7695782 Idk, you tell me

7695148 The only reason I put a sad tag is because of Cadance blaming herself for being the cause of Flurry being born an alicorn

7695916 Got it. I don't think that's enough to warrant a sad tag since it turns out ok in the end.

Downvoted due to Shining wanting to "get lucky" in his youth.

A much less important matter is that while being an alicorn has some bad it has a lot more good. The guilt seems totally misplaced.

7698560 "In his youth?" I was referring to his teenage years, when almost everybody wants to experience sex for the first time, or in today's logic's case, when every teenage girl wants to get pregnant, and when they have the baby, realize they bit off more than they could chew. "Get lucky" wasn't referring to getting some mare pregnant, but just to lose his virginity (if you've seen American Pie, you'll know what I'm talking about) Also, I threw in the thing with Cadance's guilt, because I didn't want to make this a full-clop story. I gave it a good ending, and didn't make it 100% about two ponies fucking each other.

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I understood what you meant by "get lucky".

7713872 Then explain why that would be downvoted.

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