• Published 19th Nov 2016
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The Pony in the Woods - Mackstack



Fluttershy pricked her ears. She could hear crying coming from inside the Everfree forest. What could it be? Was somepony hurt? As she ventured forth she found a pony, just not quite a sort of pony she had been expecting...

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Comments ( 6 )

This is gonna be an adventure. I'm down!

-_- ok, i won't lie, first chapter was good, this one, they literally say they'd watch her and make sure she stays in the cabin, then boom as soon as this one starts, no one is until the end of the chapter

Totes could've added the transformation fetish. Have Fluttershy turn into a tentapony.

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Stupid characters do stupid things so plot can happen

Interesting concept, compared to most other stories here, I like it!
great plot and I would like to know if Lythe manages to break Applejack and the others too, or if Fluttershy is also transformed similar to
Lythe :raritywink:
would like to see a sequel someday :yay:

The tentacles slid in as a gasp emitted from Fluttershy.

"Good girl. I'm giving you the greatest of gifts, and you ought to really appreciate that."

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