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Budget_Player_Cadet


Expat American brony living in Germany. Occasionally, I write smut or read something that isn't smut.

Comments ( 12 )

Enjoyed quite a bit. Good to see something like this.

I don't know if it's the darker themes of this one, or what, but I think this one is less rereadable than the original.

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I kind of expected that reaction, yeah. This is not the most re-readable story.

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I believe there are other things as well, beyond the darker tone, that make it kind of hard for me to reread this one, and those same things have also prevented me from going back to the original in a while as well.

However, I'm not going to say what specifically those are mostly because they have to do with headcanons and other stuff, and I don't think this is the right place to bring them up.

The was the pressure gave way

This seems wrong...

Still, a pretty good story altogether!

Starlight, never apologize for using the safe word, that's what it's for.

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Whoops! How'd I miss that one?

This is fucking great. Consensual hypnosis is my favorite, and it's something I feel doesn't get used (correctly) nearly enough.

10/10 for proper use of a safe word.

Remember kids, both the dom AND sub are supposed to enjoy themselves.
Communication is key.

If I had read this one before the other, I'd have been upset/horrified.

It's the knowing that this is consensual play that makes it readable.

Aww, this was wonderful. Always good to see BDSM that respects safewords & aftercare. Adding hypnosis to the mix makes it hotter, but really it's the caring relationship that makes this work.

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