• Member Since 29th Jul, 2011
  • offline last seen Nov 21st, 2011

XanaToast


While not out fighting crime or trying to find new ways to eat Cheese, I find myself dabbling in a little bit of FanFiction, sometimes for less than honorable reasons.

Comments ( 22 )
#1 · Aug 1st, 2011 · · ·

I must say I like it. It just feels a little short. Or maybe it's just me, usually I read longer stories :twilightsmile:

Extend. Good story but sometimes i ask myself why i read fanfics that have anything to do with alcohol

#3 · Aug 9th, 2011 · · ·

Mmm, needs a bit more.
Very nicely written for a short, though. I wouldn't mind a second chapter.

Yep, I agree with everybody , I'd love to see a second part, at least, the next morning :)

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Definitely agreed. The morning after is going to be... interesting, in many ways, I'm sure. :raritydespair:

#6 · Oct 13th, 2011 · · ·

the ending was good but a second chap will be good that would explain next morning still good story :twilightsmile:

#7 · Jan 5th, 2012 · · ·

Yay for mummy-Dash! :yay:
Second chapter is needed, indeed.

I like where this is going. Would be nice to have one more chapter though :unsuresweetie:

Second Chapter, Y U NO MAKE IT?

I agree with everypony. This is too short and open-ended. You need a second chapter to truly close this story.


Also, mummy Dash is made of win.

good story:raritystarry: bad ending for AJ:ajsleepy:

this story is just like diamond in the rough but backwards because applejack was the one drunk off her flank. might i ask if that was inspiration for this fic?

on other note, it was really nice

Not bad, but needs a resolution. Basically, this story has no ending.

Mad

Agghh! My pride! And my knee!”

You shall never adventure again.

Mad

6065926 We were all thinking it, I'm just the only one that had the balls to say it :rainbowkiss:

6081051 as my granddad used to say:
there once was a fairy called Nuff
Fairy Nuff

(I hope you get it :pinkiehappy:)

Mad

6091162 I did, your grandpa had an awesome taste in puns :rainbowlaugh: Really hope that wasn't a reference.

Now with its own reading!:

Le Chapter 1

What is this, 2011?

Oh. I guess it is.

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