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Phoenix Warlord
A lover of Halo, Star Wars, Ponies, Fallout, and many things. Has many pony waifus. 1/2 of Warfire Writing Studios
Phoenix Warlord
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Great story thanks
7582514 You're welcome!
Pretty good story, now the wait begins for the orgy with Pumpkin, Pound, Mrs and Mr Cake....
I feel so sorry for Pound Cake.
7583623 Eh i'd prefer just Mr. Cake and Pound Cake double-teaming Pumpkin in all her holes. As for this story, I feel so sorry for Pound Cake having to fuck his fat misshapen mother.
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I don't. Seriously I don't understand the hate for her. Mrs. Cake is not even close to being ugly and/or disproportionately fat. Just because she's slightly plumpy doesn't mean she's completely undesirable. It's honestly surprising to me how much dislike Mrs. Cake gets from time to time.
As for the story, I just think the dialogue could be a bit better and less corny hentai quotes. It's still a decent clopfic though.
Cakes family fun time
7588225 Pretty much, yes!
Im kinda confused at the beginning where Pound says that it was hot to see her fucked by her dad and that she was lucky. So im wondering if he says that because she gets fucked in general or that shes being fucked by their dad and he wants to also.
I like this story because it's sexy as ish. But, it needs more usage of the word "enhance". didn't see enough of that.
7825318 Thanks for the comment and glad you liked it. Noted for the future with enhance. Thanks for that.
Nice story, but I found some small things to edit.
That should be "were".
That should be "thrust".
And you'll want to delete the double space between those two words.
If mrs cake had a swear, it would overflowing. Holy hot hell, that was a good read.
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!