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Why not add it from the start?
7519957 It was listed from the start. Check the tags on it.
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I'm sure they were asking why you didn't just start with clop.
7520305 Oh, I see. The requestor had asked for some build up to the story before AJ and Twi have sex together. Like I said, the sex will come later in the story. Did that clarify things?
Make Out City!
Whew, Twi managed to not poke AJ in the eye with her horn.
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It wasn't me that really cared one way or another.
However, I do prefer this AJ ship with another Mane Six. The initial date feels a little pressed, but it has to start somewhere.
7523192 Ah okay I see. Yeah, a story has to start somewhere right? Still, glad you like this pairing! I like it too and think it's a bit underrated in my opinion. But stay tuned for it when it gets updated.
Feels a little bit rushed - the setup could be fleshed out a little bit more, and maybe a deeper introspection into their feelings?
Not bad here take a like hope you keep it going
Could use some more feeling into it but only that your story is good
7895888 Thanks for the comment! Will take note and use it for future chapters.
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Hey there! We do have some of the next chapter done, but we haven't been able to work on it lately since our schedules are a bit crazy ATM. We didn't forget, rest assured. We'll let you know when we're ready to upload the next chapter.