A story of an unusual epidemic that seemingly randomly turns ponies into billy goats right around the time of the annual Equestrian Open in Ponyville, and the efforts to curb or solve this by an illustrious scientist and her lovely assistant dragon and her friends.
Who is responsible? Why would they do this? What is your favorite color? What is the air speed velocity of an unladen Flutterpony?
This is my first attempt at a fanfiction for MLP that I've published, keyword published.
Feedback is appreciated.
By feedback I mean post in the comments don't just down vote, tell me why you down voted.
The Mane 6 won't appear all at once, nor the CMC, nor Discord. They show when they show.
If you get the references in the story, the massive glaring ones, this mustache is for you.
A tentative schedule for this story is a new chapter every other day until it is completed.
Note: look my silent first critic appeared on this story.
The good: I liked the jokes and general style, it's very hitchhiker-esque
The bad: there's a lot of akward, run on sentences which makes it tough to read
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Thank you for the feedback.
I am glad you liked the jokes, style, and humor.
I'll get right to work on correcting those run on sentences, it's bad habit of mine.
By right to work, I mean after I get the two planned second chapters for my other stories going.
So more like sometime this evening, or later tonight.
Let me know if I missed any, and thank you once again.
An African or American flutterpony?