Sugar Belle is just a normal pony in Our Town. She likes baking, and hopes that Mr. Right Stallion will come along soon. Until then, she attempts to live every day to the fullest. Of late, however, she has become disillusioned, and is looking for a way out.
Now if only these new ponies to town weren't so rude.
1st-person, slightly experimental writing. Slight unsettling tones, but only within the level of what was already seen in The Cutie Map episodes.
Day 4 of my Self-Imposed 31 Fics in 31 Days Challenge.
Chapters (1)
breathe
The words 'I thought' probably shouldn't be italicized, since they aren't thoughts.
The town didn't have multiple kinds of muffins.
Saw it in group. Will check out later and let you know how it is
I haven't seen a fic like this before. Good work!
7454302 Thanks, corrected.
7454729 Not when the Mane 6 were visiting. That's part of the point of that scene, an attempt to
humaniseequinise Starlight (somewhat) by having her struggle with not accepting any preferential treatment and getting cranberries in hers.7457477 Thanks! I will at least be covering Double Diamond in two fics as well, no idea if I'll do anything for Party Favor or Night Glider.
7459097 I finally got around to this fic and I must say... I love it
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That was a fun examination of her point of view. The confusion of her inner monologue was fascinating!
Nice deep look into the mind of Sugar Belle in the events of the show