• Member Since 18th Jul, 2016
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After nearly 19 years of cruelty and ungratefulness, Alex decides to search for a good ending to it. When everything seems lost, he finds a portal to Equestria. His life changes totally forever. He soon meets the girl who also was disliked here...

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 8 )

His mum really hates him. S***. A few grammar mistakes, and one or two sentences that felt a bit stilted, but overall, pretty good!

Interesting! This is a good start!

Sorry i just cant get in this story its to random for me and i cant get in the story to

Wow... this is so hard to read i am sorry. What the hell is going on?

i aprove of this ship sailing

LOVE IT DONT DELEATE IT

I DONt thINK IT IS RANDOM SRRY FOR ALL CAPS MY CAPS LOCK IS STUCK

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