Could you do an epilogue with the ponies? Just to show how his death affected them.

OH man what a twist! Right before dying for real he magically returns home only to die there! Oh man the freaking sucks!

Oh jeeze.
This is really good.
Do you plan on writing more like this?

One of the best pieces I've read, thank you for this.

well written i enjoyed it , do please write more in the future i hope to see more stories by you in the near future .

The feels...

THE FEELS!

7363773 If I do it will more than likely be a separate story all together and it'll take me a lil' while to get all the point of views and emotions down correctly, but the challenge to write something like that will definitely be worth it. Thanks for the read&comment!

7364234 Yes, I do plan on writing more.
Of this? Maybe. But I do plan on staying in the Sad/Dark/or whatever the fuck I feel like genre.
Thank you for your two-cents though, I appreciate it!

7364450 Thanks for the fav&follow, Sunbro!
PRAISE THE SUN! PRAISE THAT SHIT!

7364609 no problem , i hope more to read more like this , I always do my friend every day .

Why do I like suicide stories so much?

7370523 Probably has something to do with mankind's self destructive nature... or something like that. What do I know, I'm drunk right now.

Cheers, love!

/GG/

7371018 The cavalry's here.

Wow, that was just SO unfair.
Poor guy.

Alt chapter where he isn't f*cked over twice?

I'm an asshole, I laughed, whoops?

I get the circumstances but fuck does giving up really bother me. I'm sure he gave the old college try but damn. Good story regardless

This is the greatest ending to a story I've ever read.