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Aye make a prologue of some sort or another ending of this where she survives the shot and Anon takes her in after she gets healed please.
Ontopic- Great story! I loved all of it (except for when she went rip)
Sigh. Not all endings are happy ones. Great one shot ( no pun intended ).
5690525 He should totally do that!
Not a bad story! A bit sad toward the end though. I would appreciate an ending where she survives.
I am shedding manly tears now.
Eh... Story was meh. Out of everything Dash was brought down by a hunter that could not tell the difference between a small duck and a big blue flying horse? Was it some stupid redneck chugging a beer while smoking crystal meth?
Wow. Even all this time he gets Rainbow's name wrong.
When I first heard rainbow mash, the first thought was this:
He did the mash...
The rainbow mash!
This was a cool story kind of like "my little dashie"
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Ugh
Everyone is taking this story so seriously
Your comment was exactly what I was not aiming for
No offense intended, in fact I'm glad you liked it
It's just, eh, I was expecting more readers to laugh at the absurdity of the story
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Yeah I'm not making a sequel or anything. I personally believe it's fine as it is, and can't really see how to improve it without drastically changing the story.
Maaaaaybe a very short chapter from the hunter's point of view. But nothing significant
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Hi, you seem to have a brain
Do you do editing and/or prereading? Not that I'll need some anytime soon, but yeah, just in case I were to submit something else, i'll probably appreciate to have the opinion of someone who has a different point of view
Edit: oh, how rude of me, I almost forgot. Thanks for commenting, of course :)
5694201 Oh sorry what I meant by cool as in it was heart warming and enjoyable I'm sorry if I accused you or something your doing a much better job then me I keep trying to submit mine and the staff keep saying something about teen idk,. Keep up the good work.
IT'S LIQUID PRIDE I SWEAR!! *sniff*
5694587 Nah, don't fret, I'm glad to have people who like what I do of course
It's just not exactly what I was expecting
Don't be sorry for saying what you think, that's your role as a reader ;)
Probably something about the story rating, as in, you're probably submitting a story rated E for Everyone, and the staff thinks it should be rated T for Teen? I can't help much without more information, but I wish you good luck with that
5696839 alright thanks for the info about the teen thing.
May I write a sequel where she survives?
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There's nothing I can do to prevent you from doing it :)
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Thanks!
Awesome one shot, but I now have a sudden urge to fill every drunk redneck with a load of slugs...
Speaking of shots fired...
oh wow.. i cant even
- wow
THIS SHOULD BE ADAPTED FOR AUDIO AND READ BY THE LOST NARRATOR OR OBAB SCRIBBLER!
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nice story just a pity that such a sad ending, I'm waiting for more similar only with a different ending ...