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Bendy


I like big ponies and I cannot lie.

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What did you think of it?

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Oddly terrifying but got a small smirk.

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What was so 'WAT' about it?

Ummmmm to much blowjobs and buttsex but good

Well this was cool and funny as always :rainbowlaugh:

After all this, I'm a little worried about what's going to happen when the ponies get nerfed. Also, Lyra hate much?

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I don't hate Lyra. I love Lyra. But I wanted to make a counterpart of her fanon human fetish version of herself. It's fun to make evil counterparts of characters.

....okay.
Where is the nerfing?...

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Story is incomplete.

Did you enjoy chapter one nonetheless?

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It was the usual butts-and-blowjobs quality mindfuck, I expected this from you, my dear Bendy.
So... next chapter. I wonder how loudly the ponies' egos will collapse.

Lol... I... I-I have no words to describe. Though, I do know that I would like to know what that bush was thinking. If plants could talk, woo... it would have some very interesting words to say about Anon. Hopefully, we can get some funny clop scenes. Maybe they were OP in bed too and they were just making him feel better.

It's the first chapter and I already want more:pinkiecrazy:

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Was there any part you liked in particular? Lines/scenes and such?


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Don't worry, Anon is not underpowered in the bedroom. XD

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Depicting Lyra as xenophobic/misanthrope is a nice touch, but besides this Anon scoring them all, this chapter had nothing new.
Sorry. :(

I see an "incomplete" tag. Does this mean what I think it means?

>>These short equines possessed large forward facing eyes,

ponies do not have forward facing eyes, not in real life or the show.

http://www.melinda3d.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/06/applejackreference.jpg

compared to

http://ami.animecharactersdatabase.com/images/2552/Madoka_Kaname.png

madokas eyes are forward facing, her eyes limit her to the edge as dipicted, which in three dimensional space peeks to the side but angled forward, forming human peripheral vision. the area she cannot see is like a little bit more than a half of a pie.

Applejacks eyes show that not only is she fully capable of looking directly to her right or left, but she is also even able to see backwards a little bit.

https://images.duckduckgo.com/iu/?u=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.wikia.com%2Fmlp%2Fimages%2F9%2F99%2FPonyville_Crowd_Cheer_S2E14.png&f=1
https://sslimg.broniesaustralia.com.au/c35a62c9a56e87fb562c7d03000d7f110d29f88a/687474703a2f2f6e617574696c75732d736f6c61722e6e65742f73656c6c796d652f31303830706f6e7973686f74732f5333453244657270792e706e67/S3E2Derpy.png

the crowd shot makes this particularly obvious, when its possible to see a ponies eyes from an angle deep behind someone.
from these angles, the most of the human eye you'd be able to see is the brow above it, not the eye itself.

6546622 Ok, that makes sense. Goes with the whole "AU, OP ponies" thing.

6546570 Just my reaction to the chapter and how different the world is compared to canon.

If I didn't know better, I would think that the human is fighting the ponies to have pity sex after he lose.

But I know the character is a just a silly human. My brain was all like "Dude! Stop challenging ponies into physical competitions, they are stronger than you! Deal with it!, try beat them in a game of cards, or chess, or something that requires intelligence next time"

It was a funny chapter nonetheless.

Can't wait for the next one.

Again with you?


Fine.....

Ahehehe. Wonderful parody of all those fics with hilariously overpowered ponies. Sure this is a bit higher end then most, but it's still great.

The bushes in Ponyville must stink.

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Not really. There would have be no ponies for a start.




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My brain was all like "Dude! Stop challenging ponies into physical competitions, they are stronger than you! Deal with it!, try beat them in a game of cards, or chess, or something that requires intelligence next time"

This Anon is an idiot. I like idiot characters.

He could try play a game of gard, or chess... only to lose anyway. XD

Kind of eh so far. Random isn't the same as funny. Maybe it'll get better once the nerfing actually starts.

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Well, even if the nerfing disappoints you. I hope at least this can inspire others to do something better with the concept of this story. Underpowered human with overpowered pony friends.

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In a setting where even the lowest-end Failcorn McAwfulsuck has enough at least psychic powers to make something float, that's kind of the default state for every story with a vanilla human for a character.

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Yes... but I've seen stories in which the ponies can stop a nuclear bomb from exploding.

I'm happy to see this posted! Looking good!

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Thanks! You were a great help.

6547654 positive renforcement good sir

Comment posted by The Kossuman deleted Feb 18th, 2016

Well this i-- *sees author*

:trixieshiftleft:

I think I know how this will go. Lyra is gonna use some dark magic to steal the ponies god like power to try and kill anon, but the mane 6 will use the rainbow of harmony to stop her. Then she'll be revealed to be either Justin Beiber in disguise or possessed by him and he will be cast into tartarus or destroyed completely and lyra will be returned to fan standard of loving humans and they'll all have an orgy.

When is the update going to happen?

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Not for awhile.

I've got about 2000 characters down. But need to write more.

Also hit a little writer's block. Plus real life is getting in the way.

"Aww man, why can’t I be an overpowered Gary Stu!"

No matter how weak You are, you are still a Gary Stu. Unfortunately.

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I'm not sure if there will be one.

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Just updated it now. This was sitting in google docs for ages, I might add another chapter in the future.

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Dis you like the update?

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