Marrying Your Twily

by CaringSlash

The wedding.

It's been 3 weeks since you purposed to Twilight and for 2 weeks now you've been planning the wedding your almost ready for. The location of your wedding is in Canterlot. It's a Canterlot wedding. Your wedding is going to be just like Shining Armor and Princess Cadence's wedding. Hopefully without a visit from Chrysalis and here changelings. Speaking of Shining Armor he's been on you like Spike was. "Your break your heart I'll have the guards on you.". You've made yourself the main attraction of Equestria when you came here but now you're making headlines. You can't even go outside because of the paparazzi or photographers wanting info and pictures of you.

Today is the wedding rehearsal and man you are nervous and excited at the same time. Everything is perfect. The decorations, food, and clothing, etc. The wedding rehearsal went as you expected. It went perfect. But your not worried about the wedding rehearsal. You are worried about the official wedding. Will something go wrong like another changling invasion or will there be a war over this. You have no idea what could happen. It could be anything.

Today is the day. This is it. It's You and Twilight's wedding. Your nervous and excited about this day but also afraid of what might happen. Twilight tells you there's nothing to worry about but your still afraid of what could have. Celestia notices it and tells you. "You have nothing to worry about. I will make sure your wedding will go perfect without the troubles of our last Canterlot wedding." Celestia assures you.

"Thank you Celestia."

You and Twilight are getting dressed for the big day and you see her friends talking about something. "I can't believe it's happening." AppleJack says. "Today is the day things will change between Us and Twilight."

"Don't worry AppleJack. Twilight will still be our friends." Rarity says.

"Your right Rarity. Nothing will change between us once I'm married." Twilight assures AppleJack.

"I'm not going to change anything between You and Twilight AJ." You assure AppleJack.

"Are you two ready." Celestia jumps in.

"Yes we are." You and Twilight both say.

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The wedding is about to start and you are so ready. You see Twilight and her dad walk down to you. You hold "Everypony. We gathered here today to witness the union of this human and Princess Twilight Sparkle." Celestia says. "Who gives this mare to be married by this human?" Twilight's dad says my wife and I and he lets her go. You hold her hooves in your hands and look into each other's eyes. You and Twilight take your vows and put a ring on each other.

"Twilght I give you this ring as a symbol of our vows, with all that I am and have. I honor you. With this ring, I wed." You say.

Then Twilight says your name. "I give you this ring as a symbol of our vows, with all that I am and have. I honor you. With this ring , I wed."

After putting your rings on Celestia announces. "I now pronounce you mare and human. You may kiss the bride." You and Twilight kiss and watch everypony cheer.

Author's Note:

I made this in 3 days and I'm sorry if it's awfully short.

Comments

[Samey90]

Your purposing and marrying Twilight.

And she promptly smacks you with her wing for inability to tell "your" from "you're", "purpose" from "propose", as well as for using present continuous tense where present simple would do as well (like, "You propose to Twilight and marry her").

[Estee]

Regarding that proofreading:

You may want to get a second opinion.

Also, commas. You're definitely going to want a few more commas.

[Flint-Lock]

Ok, here's a quick analysis of this fic:

-It's too short
-It's cliched
-Your protagonist has virtually no characterization
-No buildup
-Countless grammatical errors

In short, it's not very good.

On the plus side, though, it sounds really funny when you run it through a text to speech program, like this

[Carlosesunbrony]

It's good enough for me

[Drago Cadenza]

I have Problems with this, but since everyone already made their opinions, I'll just say that it's not really good.

[Blueberry-Dash]

See I liked the short one because of its short snappy and whitty approach in its style of writting, but I felt like this one had much more potential for expanding on the story.

[Shadowblade019]

Lazy writer

[TheOneAJ]