Seattle, hm?
I like it.

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Erm, in fact, you were the second to post lol

Well now. This is interesting. You write with enough familiarity that Im wondering if you actually do—or have—live in Seattle. Always cool to meet another pone-fic writer of the NW.

Not sure if gusta... good story though.

good story

I like this because I've seen a million first person guy x pony fics, but never lesbian girl on pony action before.

Like it.

This is such a sweet, emotional story I couldn't help but d'aww after reading it.

It's a shame it hasn't gotten more attention, because it really explores so many things so well. Namely, the world crossing thing, the female/female interspecies angle, a realistic take on Dash, and the geniune romance along with the sex. I almost wish you made an epilogue where they do get back to equestria, just for some reactions and worldbuilding. But that's just my greed speaking, and it's quite nice the way it is.

Works really well for a short story, but obviously it'd be fantastic if you continued.
Loved it either way, though.

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I agree, it would be great if the author did a sequel.

This is very interesting, using Megan from G1 in an FiE is a good idea I might work on one myself sometime.

You know, I've read this about a dozen times. And... I love this. You wrote both characters note-perfect. The sex is... romantic. It's two beings who genuinely love each other and you conveyed that great. I can honestly see Dash and an adult Megan acting like this towards each other.

The only 'bad' thing I can see? I want more. I really, really do. I know this is an older story, and marked 'complete', but it if ever continued or a sequel is posted I'd be reading that.

can there be a sequel for this? I need to see what happens when they find a way back home and what her friends think of her new fillyfriend.

NICELY DONE !!! HOPE FOR A SEQUEL

This story is so great!