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Will read the story, but before I forget, I have to say it.
Dat picture...

Edit: Nice

Bondage themed trade eh? Interesting.

Over 9,000 words?
Mark my words, darf.
I will be back tomorrow to read this. Er, later today.
Because.. it's 3 AM. And.. I'm tired. :ajsleepy:

Amazing stuff! It's a little hardcore for people new to D/s roleplay, but for fans this is like catnip. This was kinky, sweet and fun; fantastic all-around. Thanks for writing in such an unexplored subgenre!

Damn...so effing twisted...URGH ME DISGUSTA...!!!

I'm confused as to whether I like this or not... No I do like this but I'm not entirely sure what my feelings are...

Could someone kindly explain exactly whats going on? Love the author but this is strange 'for me personaly'.. I have no clue how to feel...

Good story though overall, just a bit confused....

Minor spelling errors, spacing issues etc... but whatever, who really came here for that kind of stuff?

I feel the same way, there are a couple parts where I am like dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_O_O.png , but then quickly it lets off. Guess it stems from my unsure feelings on BDSM. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Rainbow_Dash.png

600575 Mhmm add to the fact this is only the.. seccond? Fic I've ever read like this 'BDSM' doesn't help, especialy this intense..? Not sure what right word it.. Never understood it or looked into it before..

I know what you mean, I really didn't even know what I was reading at first, it was at the top of the main screen and I have a bad habit of clicking on the first thing I see with a picture that makes me do something similar to this --->dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
Only other stuff I have encountered is usually Rarity beating herself :rainbowlaugh: or Ask Lil' Miss Rarity (though that is disturbing in a little different way).dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Redheart_gasp.png

This is not my fetish.
That said, I do not begrudge any individual their fantasy scenarios (sexual or otherwise) with fictional characters, no matter ho badly they may conflict with my own.
On the subject of this fetish: Power cannot be taken, only given, either willingly or unwittingly. Control is only held by the failing or by the grace of those it is held over. This is why D/s relationships actually can be far more mutual and reciprocal than standard dynamics.




I know my feelings stem from the fact that I like being a sub, you just need to find your "place".

Really good writing.
And as quilly said, it's a bit hardcore for peoples without 'experience' on the genre, but it's so well written that it's just exeptionnal.
Even though I'd prefer Dash being the boss ;D
But still really good story.

:rainbowwild: dat picture.... :rainbowderp:

What the fuck? I'm not sure whether I am aroused or disgusted, all I do know is that I want the human dead.

<likes story>

This is one of the best, if not the best, clopfic I've ever had the pleasure of reading. 10/10! :pinkiehappy:

So... Regular Dash is spelled normally, but when she's behaving like a sub she's just dash. It's an interesting gimmick that worked alright for this story, but I can't say I would recommend using it again.

Aside from that, a pretty hot fic, that's coming from someone who typically doesn't do bondage or Dom/sub stuff. Well done, you're now being watched! :)

it's not really a gimmick, it's the proper way to refer to a sub when they're in a submissive mind state or you want to convey their worth or power as being less than yours
i have an ex who's name i still can't bring myself to capitalize for this exact reason
(also i just realized it may or may not raise questions about my failure to capitalize my pronouns on a regular basis, but i'll just chock that up to laziness)

ITS OVER 9000!!!!!!!!!!!!!





People who don't understand BDSM in these comments...

I'm fairly amazed. I haven't read very good sub-Dash in a while, and I still love it. You do a really awesome job going between brutal (but entirely consensual, that's an important distinction in my mind) BDSM and adorable scenes that actually develop some sort of relationship between "us" and Dash, even if it's a short-lived and shallow one.

I give you a Suitaloo, good sir. Her womanizing ways are relevant.

Good, but FAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAKE. Real fake. Just plain fake. Anyways. There was a few Typos but other that that it was good i guess. :J

Still fake. Gets faker by the second i'm sorry. ;_; Jus' sad.

i'm sorry, i'm not sure what you're implying
besides the fact that this is a story about a fictional character, it's pretty much a complete parallel to a set of real life experience i've had
just because you've never been in a relationship of this nature is no reason to get resentful

downvoted! That would NEVER happen to Rainbow. NOBODY MESSES WITH FIREFLASH'S BFF!

Note: in my fanfic, Rainbow Dash is my (Fireflash's) BFF
I'm Fireflash

No good, dude. Don't mess with Rainbow

601159 Damn man, that's just too cute! Where'd you find it?

605410 Oh god. Someone made a Bishonen out of the Chicken?!?:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:




oh wait, you appear to be serious. That's not funny, that's just sad.


Honestly, I can't remember. I collect them- I have a folder filled with... *Checks* Apparently, 208 pony macros, gathered from all over the place since after Season 1 ended. It's mostly a mix of google searches and MyLittleFaceWhen.com though. I have a Photobucket account where I upload the pictures I want to use, on an as-needed basis.

For example!



610559 Great picture, but I kinda have to agree with him.

At least on the Dash is best pony part,

611043 Silly person. That's not how you spell Fluttershy!

611276 Is it possible to have three favorites? Cause for me it's actually a tie between RD, TS, and NMM for the fav villain (cause I've been a bad brony and haven't kept up with the episodes).


Hardcore BDSM. Hell yeah!

604632 Pretty much this.

Well that's actually something of a standard when using Dom/sub scenarios. In writing, you always refer to the Master in a dominant context, including capitalizing the name or Master at all times. Regardless of it being grammar appropriate. Same with the sub always being non capital. Its just a semi-formal rule in that niche of writing. There are plenty of other rules, but most of them are specific to the dom/sub themselves; and most of them do not apply to a written format.

Don't ask me how I know this stuff. >.>

624772 Ah, I see. Well, the more I know. Silly me.

Okay, so now that what I believed were a slew of technical errors have been explained to me, I have no complaints. It got a bit harsh for my personal tastes, but it was still brilliant. I love seeing psychology done well, and the switches in this, especially with such a brash character as Rainbow Dash, are very cool to see.

And, y'know, the sex. That was good too.

And you are either laying on a bad joke way too thick, or you are serious, in which case you honestly don't understand how a Dom/sub relationship works. Dash wants to be treated the way she is in this, and could end the entire game with a single word if pressed too far. This isn't a dark abuse fic, it's a healthy, if unorthodox, relationship.


661242 i am totally serious. FireFlash does not like. :flutterrage:

Eh, fair enough. It's definitely not a fetish for everyone. Just wanted to make sure you understood what was going on, as BDSM can be one of the more confusing fetishes from the outside.

my god... so many word... THERE'S OVER NINE THOUUUUUUUUUUSSSAAAANNNDDD!!!!!!! :pinkiegasp:

Dash being such a headstrong and confident pony certainly makes it more fun to see her get broken, (even more so because she likes it).
Awesome story. At first I didn't know what to think when it got to the point of choking but it was handled in just the right way that I kept reading. Glad I did, because the ending was satisfying and downright adorable.


But 3AM is best reading time.

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