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And then one had to face death to go through the obstacle co- I mean... playground.
AWesome an update,
Oh geez a new story cover art.
Good chapter
Hmm I wonder how amaze Spartan would be if he learn that Twilight and her friends took down Discord. Or what he would do if he found out what Discord did to them before he was beaten. Anyways I always smile when a update happens with this story. Just to see the shenanigans he gets in to. You can never have to much shenanigans!
yay! i can imagine spartan turning the playground into one of thise japanese game shows, with the swinging bags and stuff
RUN THROUGH THE GAUNTLET IF YOU DARE CHILDREN!
amazing and great new cover art
Another great chapter. I cannot wait for the next. The Spartan seems to be adjusting to this new world. Hopefully, he will fully adjust to this new way of life and become a semi-normal (who wants to be normal!) pony.
Dude, with that Daring Do and True Facts shipping you got there, you might as well work on a Daring Do fan fic also.
I'm a bit jealous about how good you can write
I wait now longing for the next and next Captures.
all of my favorite stories updated all at once. See all you peoples in about 2 hours. I'm gonna READ!
Agoge/community service.
Same thing
STEAL FOALS LUNCH MONIES.
Also plant a tree with love. YOU LIVE IN A LIBRARY THAT IS CARVED OUT OF A TREE WITH A MARE YOU HAVE MUTUAL ROMANTIC INTERESTS. SPARTAN, THINK LIKE AN ATHENIAN FOR ONCE.
He'd promised her that they day they'd met, when he'd mistaken her for an alleyway tail-lifter. He respected her too much for that.
Fix that part
'Go plant a tree, because i'm a druid and i like trees.' I now imagine all druids thinking that.
I hope either Spartan is wrong about Twilight's magical strength being tied to her virginity, or that Celestia warned her about it long ago and she's fully aware of the tradeoff. Otherwise I could see some rather bad fallout in the future.
I'm thinking "plant a tree with love" may something little.......more.......personal. Meaning involving Twilight....Bedsheets and a certain Spartan Stallion.
840514 Lucky thing Spartan Shield can't hear you. If he could, he'd probably hang you from your own innards. (To compare a Spartan to their blood enemies, the Athenians, would be one of the worst insults one could apply!)
I can't stop picturing him setting up an assault course with swinging axes and conveyor belts
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Sad thing is, those exist in our world, and kids love them. So the foals would absolutely love it.
Thoughts. Such unclean thoughts are in my mind right now. I must cease this feral hunger of mine, I must chop wood!!!
Finally caught up to your fairly insane update-schedule.
And I must say... I am DEEPLY impressed. Very, very well done.
I love your pacing, the short "history"-lesson at the beginning, the rising tension between Twi and Spartan and the overarching story of adjusting to the modern day. You are doing a brillant job here, and I hope you keep it up in future chapters.
Greetings from Germany!
awesome new cover
i've already figured out everything but the crying mare and the blue box. heh, you slow spartan
This ain't gonna turn out well...
>.>
woah... how is it poseble to not see that he yust need to be a softy and get a firm rutting with twilight to build a famalie... plat a tree huh? >///<
hmm...blue box.......do i see Dr.Hooves on the horizon?
So much talk about coitis
He could always stud himself out to 250 fat mares for a hundred bits a piece, or 25 REALLY fat mares for a thousand each...what? Fat chicks need love too, but they gotta pay.
842285 Or stallions.
I don't think ANYONE has picked up on the subtle hints I've been dropping about stuff like that.
(That, and he imagined her Shining Immortal Majesty would brutalize him for deflowering her protégé. Her horn was quite long, after all.) this is so wrong if you are a fan of princess molestia.
and too be honest i forgot all about that cape scarf.
842366 Scarfs take awhile to knit. Mine's like eight feet long from tip to tip.
Do not fear a blue box...
Plant a tree with love...
Please don't tell me that you're going to have Spartan Shield go back in time using the Doctor's TARDIS and plant the tree that will become Twilight's library...
"The farmer was… well, a farmer, beneath him."
PLEASE, make him say that to aj then have her kick his ass
842568 well I've allready met a roman named rory why not a spartan named shield
Sincerely the Doctor
Heh, another chapter's always good. So, our little history flashback is showing Daring Do's first big archeological find was Spartan Shield and the other relics of the Battle of Moon's Apex, eh? And that is what set the real archeologist and her friend on her path to future finds. Now I'm wondering if one looks at the author's page for the Daring Do novels, we find a certain name along with a disclaimer that while the situations in the book are fictionalized, the artifacts described can be found in the thus-and-such collection. One would have to admit that writing a series of adventure novels would help pad the budget for upcoming dig efforts. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png
So, Twilight's finally getting around to some of the recent history, and I sense that Spartan's still a little bit on the sceptical side about things in the history books. (Probably a good thing that they haven't gotten around to discussing Discord, then (or did this version of the history include the Spirit of Chaos managing to slip his bonds in the first place?) I see that the two are still flirting with the idea of flirting, and may I congratulate you on the timing that manages to just keep things on the edge without managing to sweep over into a resolution. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png
I see that Spartan's already encountering the traditional problem of anyone who ever consulted an oracle, that of second-guessing nearly everything they do as they try to work out the meaning of their prophecy. Well, if nothing else, he has something extra to occupy his mind while he works on his community service project. Speaking of which, I think that an upgrade for the public school's playground has merit, he's right that the area's light on the physical training side. And I'm sure that if the proper sorts of gear is placed there, it would even be used by most of the colts and fillies. Now, he just has to figure out what he can do to raise money.. That ought to be interesting to see.
Looking forward to the next installment.
The library door came open quite suddenly and they jumped apart, looking awkwardly at the visitors. It was Rarity and the Cutie Mark Crusaders! “H’oh my!” Rarity said with a rather devilish smile. “Are we interrupting anything, Twilight?”
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(later that night on TV3 News)
We bring you this next story from Ponyvile, warning the following images are considered mature and should not be viewed by young children.
A blue box.... hmmmm methinks a TARDIS is in store.
I vote after he gets done with his playground... Renovations... we give Spoon and Tiara the "honor" of testing it out.
There will be blood. Oh yes, there will be blood.
figured out nearly the entire prophecy, not fair since not all of it is possible to guess until the time arrives.
It'll be funny to see how Spartan reacts when he learns that not only did the Mane 6 defeat Nightmare Moon, but Discord as well.
I did notice the hints that Spartan swings both ways but said nothing about it cause I thought that that was just you doing your research, as bisexuality and homosexuality was common and accepted within many of the Mediterranean City States.
Violence begets violence: Stop being violent, it'll help you fit in.
A Weeping Mare Loves: Luna is a mare, Spartan will somehow catch her crying and see she has changed because of this.
Fear not a blue box: Ohai thar, Docter. :D
Plant a tree with love: (My mind is usually dirty, but I didn't catch what everyone else seemed to, though it makes sense now.) Not sure…
Honor the gods: Derp. Celestia/Luna. Derp.
Honor your love: (Because of what Aegis said about dropping hints…) I think I might see where this is going…
Forsake thy anger: Same as first one.
Embrace in the night: (Umm…now that you mention it, Aegis, I see the hints everywhere…) ...
And am I catching a subtle dislike of FlutterMac pairing here:
"The oracle was not for a stallion to be touching-- ever."
You worry me, Mr Shield.
You see, those devious obstacle courses aren't fun. What's fun is the satisfaction you get for completing the obstacle course, especially if you complete it before/faster than your friends. Nothing like some healthy competition to make even the most tedious, nigh-impossible, challenging-to-the-point-of-tears activities into the very definition of fun.
840564 Bwahaha now I'm never gonna stop thinking that with my DnD group. our duids gonna kill me.
nobody recognises that the Spartans were into dudes too? come on for like the first chunk of their lives they saw more cock than a sex toy tester.
I tihnk I know of an EASY way he can make at least an eighth of that money: Set up a kissing booth in the market.
No, just hear me out: he's in GREAT physical condition. MULTIPLE mares in Ponyville find him attractive. The vast majority of the population in Ponyville are female.
As long as he doesn't charge an outrageous amount and isn't too rough, no doubt many of them will come back again later. Perhaps several times in one hour.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH, COMPLEMENTING TWILIGHT SPARKLE IN ANY INSTANCE, IT BURNS US!!! Gollum...gollum...gollum!
840566 I, for one, utterly despise that. "OMG naughty 18+ action nullify mai powahs!" pffft! I get it if there's some sort of justification, like some... magical pact or something, like if the contractor doesn't want the power being wielded by someone with children... but just like that...
Plus, if we're applying a little Greek-ness to Equestria, I'm willing to bet Celly has taken a few colts to bed already! And Spartan's opinion of Luna can go to he-Tartarus. Maybe it's pure suggestion/guilt on the part of the 'Solar Mage', or he's wrong or has been lied to. I mean, he's already wrong about the oracles (most likely inadvertently); can't have bloodlines if you don't have kids, and that is usually a couple's activity. Maybe it's another factor that's been kept secret from him, like... saying "I wish to retire but as long as they think I have power they'll pester me forever."
On top of that, the world changed, needs are different, things don't have to be the same blah blah blah we already changed a few rules what's one more? It's very unfair as well.
Though chances are Twilight is just that awesome by herself, and Spartan is worrying about no... thing... hell, maybe she already got some 'experience'.
Oh, though his concerns for his health should something bad happen to Twily are real, so he better be afraid, be very afraid.
853899 Well think of it in context.
In Greece, priestesses were expected to be virgins, to devote themselves entirely to their goddess and not worry about any sort of mortal sin of the flesh. Devotion was all that mattered. Spartan has assumed that Twilight Sparkle, being the Princess protege, is a "solar mage"--- which hasn't been explained yet-- but he seems to believe a similar way to the beliefs of other pantheoistic traditions.
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That's one explanation, yes. As such, it's fine by me.
Also, now that you say it, I noticed I forgot to bring it up: "He's still thinking like he's back a thousand years ago."
i have a THEROY about the profacy meaning, or at least part of it.....
To deflower Twiligt? too grand!
977148 *SLAP*