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Twilight is so adorkably cute!
Very nice story. Keep up the good work.
Most. Awkward. Tea party. Ever.
Celestia saw her look out of the corner of her eye, the glitter of mischief rising up in her gaze.
Anyone?
All that needs to be said
i came when i saw the title
not really though, good chapter
Very well done, as always. Oh, Celestia. You so silly!!
Alternate title for this chapter: The Many Shades of Twilight Sparkle.
Twilight please for the love of Celestia stop helping.
first is the worst...
awesome chapters as always my good man
Spartan Shield is in love.
Trollestia Time!
Another chapter? So soon?
Would you be terribly unsettled if I told you that I love you?
I'm curious what Spartan will do when he learns Twilight is in fact NOT a solar pony.
wait, so after all this time twilight isn't planing to introduce spartan to her parents? I mean, he has openly declare his intentions toward her. And let's not forget that her brother is the captain of the royal guards. I think that he would be interested on knowing who is the pony that treated his squads as bowling pins
I expect this magnificent story to end with Twilight's deflowering and the loss of her magic.
... Because irony!
Oh Twilight, you're such a perv.
sexist laws of shapeless virginity-oriented solar-powered magic
This made me laugh so hard and I don't even know why.
Anyways, each chapter is getting better and better and better. Disregard homework, I have ponies!!
Excellent work!
is adorkable.
"STAL-YUHHHNS! THREE CHEERS FOR THIS STORY!!!!"
“HA’OOH! HA’OOH! HA’OOH!”
Your Loyal and Loving fan Lord Stormy Sky
HA! I'd say about 500bits for one Twilight Sparkle, seems fair to me.
Most painful teaparty ever.
Im going to give this chapter 10 bro-staches
I'm not one for a main and OC but this is very impressive, I know for a fact that the Lunar guards were waiting for Spartan to do SOMETHING, suprised they did not slice off his head when their foreherds colied.....damn...this is getting great with each new chapter, though to be honest, I'm going to ignore the romance.
I like how I never need to check for updates.... they always are in that kind box at the top.
and read.
Ran out of flashbacks?
Awesome chapter btw.
dipping a thea bag with luna.... that sounds so akward >///<
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>She couldn’t imagine having tea with a pony that had killed everyone she’d every known, but clearly Princess Celestia wanted him to at least try to make nice.
What's an everyone?
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I hardly ever laugh (unless its dirty or just plain funny) But i laughed at least 6 times
so now i have to ask
Is Spartan Shield's kid in any of your stories?
I was wondering when Spartan's beliefs about Twi being a solar pony would come out in the open.
Very fun chapter, but then again they just about all have been.
899475 You stole my post!
The best part about this chapter was that I was listening to this song just before I read it
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OO95A1if5f0&feature=related
Agies Sheild's self insert made me realize something. (pay attention, this is going to get complicated):
Spartan clopped /w/ Moondancer + Agies Sheild suggested his self-insert was related to Spartan=Two possible outcomes:
1) Since Moondancer had no idea who the father of the unborn child (she mentioned it earlier) was, she named it after Spartan. Hence, Spartan Jr. is Agies Sheild's ancestor, but not Spartan. Makes sense?
No? Here's something simpler:
2) Spartan got Moondancer pregnant AGAIN and Agies Sheild really is a decendant of Spartan.
Fantastic once again.
Tell me, just out of interest. Would you or have you considered describing the love scene in more intimate detail and putting in a seperate entry? Just as an alternative.
WE NEED TO SEE DARING DOO'S REACTION TO SPARTAN SHIELD NOT BEING IN STONE ANYMORE!
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Beautiful! I hope that maybe, possibly, there will be Friendship at last between Luna and Spartan.
At the very least, they should manage to tolerate each other.
Oh, and this needs more romance. Much more.
Trollestia returns
Twilight is so dirty. She always seem so innocent
I did see what I think to be an error. "Luna said awkwardly, pouring his cup of tea, then his." Shouldn't one of those "his" be a "her?"
Great chapter. Have a moustache.
Yay, Twilight gets to bang Spartan and still keep her magic!
There's still plenty of stuff before that happens though, I imagine. Spartan needs to see that Big MacIntosh is recovering, needs to meet Twilight's family, and deal with everything that's bound to go hilariously wrong in the process. :)
Twilight Sparkle X Spartan Shield
I'd ship that. I'd ship that so hard I create implosion.
And here's a random Rarity.
Trollestia strikes back!
And Twilight gets to bang Spartan!
Oh, I just love how you write Celestia. It seems so accurate. From her and Luna's bantering, to just the way she interacts with Twilight. Not too casual, which is a problem in many stories. And thank goodness you don't have her fainting, that is just... just... just stupid! She's the ruler of Equestria for Luna's sake! She's going to have the composition needed to!
Okay, I'm done ranting.
Great chapter.
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...I would pay to see that. The look on True Fact's face when he finds out his wife's little crush on that statue from twelve years ago might not be as harmless as he thought would be hilarious!
so when is spartan gonna tell aegis he is his great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great Grandpa
LOL, great chapter, can't wait for more :D
I laughed through the entire tea party. Good job, and I can't wait to see where this goes next.
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Spartan: "YOU BASTARD SON OF A WHORE!"
Aegis Shield: "What?! Where did that come from! I thought this was a peace meeting, and-"
"Oh, no, sorry, I err... may actually know who your great grandma was..."
"What has that got to do with... Oh. OH. Aww..."
"If it's any consolation, my son, you're about to be an uncle, I should think! Or, nephew? Would this make Twilight thy grandma in law, then?"
"For the love of god, stop telling ponies that. I'm far too young to be a great, great, great, great, great, great grandma!"
'Ah, my betrothed, but surely thou is deserving of that many greats? Thou IST the greatest, after all!"
"Laying it on a bit thick, aren't we-:
"And those many years in the library have given you perfect, wide and cushy hips to bear many, many children!"
"Wide... Many... Are you saying I'm... Yes? Okay, then!"
Twilight nods at Aegis. Aegis nods back.
HOOF TO THE BALLS
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"BET YOU WISHED THAT PART HAD STAYED STONE RIGHT ABOUT NOW, HUH, BITCH?!"
"Err... That's a little truer than you'd like to think, Aegis "
"...Can I kick him again yet?"
"No, it's my turn next!"
Spartan, moaning; "Eughh... My wife shall bear the strongest foals of all..."
"I... Can't decide whether I want to kick you more or less for saying that..."
Spartan grins before promptly passing out.
I HAVE NO IDEA WHY I MADE THIS COMMENT AS LONG AS IT DID I JUST COULDN'T STOP THINKING OF FUNNY THINGS