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There. This is a much better ending. Spartan Shield is best troll. Next to her highness, of course.
(Stay tuned for the wedding night clop-ilogue, if you like.)
That was amazing
Can't wait for the Wedding Night
YES!
Oh thank you THANK YOU for this ending! Much, MUCH better than the other one. Not saying the other one was bad.
That's what I call an ending, unlike the previous one.
I love the end of this chapter. It's good to see that Spartan has really loosened up with Twilight.
WTF? i thought this story was finished?
Ohhhh, now THERE is some culture shock!
Quote: “SHE HAS EXCELLENT FOAL-BEARING HIPS! I KNOW THIS! I HAVE FELT THEM!”
I'm surprised Twilight didn't melt into the shadows and pretend she didn't hear that I wonder if she will get some questions the next day from well-meaning older mares as to when she is expecting?
It has returned and it is glorious!
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“Armor only shines when it’s not been used at all. Battle virgin.” -- That actually made me giggle snort!
I just have two things to say.
1: Spartan...... you are terrible..... keep it up
2: The Angry Brony approves
Yes, much better ending I agree!
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Huh. Your right. This is better. And I will.
This needed to be done. The story can end without ending the story, after all.
your killing me this is your best story and chapter that i laugh at lol STOP RIGHT THERE CRIMINAL SCRUM YOUR UNDER ARREST FOR MURDER AND USING LAUGHTER AS A DEADLY WEAPON.
How else do you put this but epic? If someone finds a better word let me know please?
And now he has Twilight using Celestia's TEATS to curse as well!
919949 Celestia personally taught spartan how to troll in his army days
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A shame to see such a great story end, but an excellent ending. I can not wait to see what story you will write next, since all the previous stories of yours that I've read have been fantastic.
I'm gonna miss this story.
This was possible the funniest way to end the story I cant wait for the next story.
Still....laughing...can't stop.
Alright, I seriously need to read your other stuff, because if it has even a FRACTION of the funny encased in this story? My ribs are gonna shatter.
"SHE HAS EXCELLENT FOAL-BEARING HIPS! I HAVE FELT THEM!" = PURE. UNADULTERATED. WIN.
THATS WHAT I THOUGHT
"by Celestia's teats" that was a hilarious and great ending!
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MMYES CLOP-ILOGUE.
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Agreed, this is a much better ending.
“No, thou!” lol
"hoof-wrestled, called each other terrible names, [...], and then tried to choke each other out. Why? Stallion bonding. It transcended time and culture."
Also works excellent for siblings.
And that ending was just amazing.
"battle virgin" OH SNAP. IT. IS. ON!
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS PLEASES ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Haha! Atta boy!
What a much better ending!
Now I don't feel so empty inside!
Yes indeed, this ending was much much better! Thanks for making use of the constructive criticism the original received, the story is vastly improved by it IMO. It gives good resolution to Spartan and Twilight's developing relationship without methodically going around attempting to seal off every single possible thread that had been raised getting here.
Definitely one of my favorite stories now, no reservations recommending it to anyone. :)
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That's when you put THIS on the next morning. At their front door.
Yay!
This is kind of ending I originally hoped for; A happy end to the day, not a foretell of everypony's life. I'm a bit iffy on clop though. But I'll still have to read it if contains story elements.
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Actually a wedding night clopfic would be kinda cool.
However one of those endings where we see the newborn foal could be kinda cool.
I think the whole spartan values when it comes to birthing would be interesting (aka the whole is the baby healthy... not malformed..)
It opens it up for a continuation The kid growing up having to deal with both twilight's values as well as the values of a spartan.
Bwahahahahhaha
Now THIS is an ending worthy of this story.
SPARTAN SHIELD VS. DARING DOO
Much better ending, though.
Great job. Excellent and hilarious story, keeping me up well past when I should probably be going to bed.
It's more beautiful than I ever imagined, and believe me, I have quite the imagination.
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XD, Trollestia can leave the trolling to the new generations.
a great chapter cant wait for the next one.
wait... why is there real world cultures in a fantasy setting?
I mean the few that feature stuff like that renamed them like that did in the show
I hate you SO MUCH for making me snort milk all over my laptop now. BURN FOR MAKING SUCH AWESOME FUNNINESS!!!!
That was much better than the first ending. This scene felt much more natural and did a much better job wrapping up the romance. It also did not bring up the possible connection between Spartan and Aegis which lets that unresolved plot thread fade away quietly, and although I would still like to see some conclusion to it, I can live with it being quietly dropped.
I knew this wasn't over that Complete Tag felt way out of Place on the other Chapter, no to speak of the abruptness of the other Ending.
for more Spartan
Oh that was just fantastic! Much better of an ending than before.
Just one request, if there is going to be a mature rated wedding night scene, could you put it in a separate deleted-scenes style story?
I would enjoy another time period piece like this if you dont mind...
Much much MUCH better ending!
Have to admit, this ending is way better. Well done!