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817810 Excellent! I shall post up a new chapter, just for you!
* hops around happily * Another great chapter. But this much is expected.
“Come out of there!” Twilight said angrily. “What’re you doing in my house? Come out of the closet!” She pulled violently at the doorknob with her magic, but the iron pony was very strong and it was held closed. “Come! Out! GUH!” she grunted then let go, panting with effort.
Spartan Shield scowled, remembering Rainbow Dash from before. “The athlete, yes?” he pressed his ear to the door. “Don’t make me come in there to get you.” He threatened.
“Pfft, you can’t fit in Twilight’s closet, you’re too big!” snorted Rainbow Dash.
“I can fit myself into anything of Twilight’s!” Spartan Shield jabbed the door again with his spear, jarring it. “This is your final warning, strange mare! Come out of the closet!” he snapped, growling angrily. Twilight saw his brow lowering into a battle-scowl, and watched his back legs coil. That was his thrusting-spear stance. He was about to break the door down!
“Let me go!” said Spike, wrestling about. There were more shuffling and bumping sounds in the tiny storage space. Spartan Shield lost his patience then. There would be no hostage situations under this roof. Twilight would be displeased if her servant came to harm. Coiling his arm, ignoring Twilight’s shout and reaching hooves, he LANCED the long spear deep into Twilight’s closet door! There was a splintering of wood and both mare and baby dragon screamed in terror. By some miracle he’d missed them both. Or, more than likely, he’d not been trying to hit them. Only to scare the hiding pony out with her hostage. “Why meeee?!” Spike wailed, having no idea what was going on and squirming about in a panic.
“Don’t SPEAR my closet!” Twilight shouted. But no, he wasn’t listening. The angry Spartan Stallion pulled his spear out, then thrust it in again around the doorknob. This caused the whole thing to shudder violently-- then fall off. He grabbed the entire door, wrenching it open loud groan of forced wood. The purple mare shrieked, dodging out of the way when he threw the whole thing over his shoulder.
God damn it, Aegis.
I remember, oddly enough, reading this chapter a few days ago.
*scratches chin*
Nothing seems new or added, so I dunno.
"I can fit myself into anything of Twilight's!" Is that so Spartan Shield?
I eagerly await every update to this, great job so far and keep up the wonderful work!
Oh luna, i do not envy you having to deal with Celestia on a semi-daily bases.
Anyway great chapter Aegis, looking forward to the next one.
SHE'S CLIMBIN' IN YO CLOSETS, SNATCHIN' YO HELMETS UP
817922 Uhhhhh no, a whole scene was removed, dialogue changed, two new scenes added, its about five hundred words longer....
READ IT.
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OKAY
This can only end well!!
Dis gun be gud
“I can fit myself into anything of Twilight’s!” I can see this coming back to bite him.
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Spartan Shield vs. Princess Luna.
_____________________________
Oh ,boy. It begins.
Luna: How would you like your remains displayed, Shield?
*Begins reading*
Hmm... one of those lunar stallions sounds familiar... I wonder... maybe...? Nah. Lost it. Tip of the tongue. Oh well.
2/3 of this chapter as moved from the last chapter... and I can not freakin BELIEVE!!! that someone other than me was able to delete my comment from the last chapter!
818048 The last incarnation of this chapter wasn't good enough. Its gone now, and there's a better one in its place.
This will end well.
So very well.
“I can fit myself into anything of Twilight’s!” Ooh REALLY NOW? Is it really...that limber?
Fuck you and your dirty mind, O' persona of mine.
818054 Ok... on closer inspection... you deleted and re-uploaded the chapter didn't you? Meaning nobody erased my comment, it's all cool.
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No nice for YOO Blue Mare!!
*Insert trolling of ~person shocked by Celestia "not knowing" how Spartan would react~ who hasn't re-posted yet HERE*
DAM CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!
whats new? :O
*closes laptop*
*gets email 10 seconds later from phone*
*opens laptop again to find no obvious updates
this is the BEST THING EVER!!!!!!!!
Ok I notice the changes and the new scenes but it still puzzles me that spartan shield is sleeping in twilight's room. I thought that he had a room on across hers, or was it a bed all along?
This is a great chapter. It's simply dripping with clever wordplay.
818246 I used the sleepover episode as a reference for the bed's location. When Twilight has guests, the bed is apparently right across from hers.
818253 I thought so, but for some reason I understood that he had his own room
"You have to be nicer, Spartan."
"No, Mage; nice stops at midnight."
"You could have been nicer, Bill."
"No ma'am; nice stops at midnight."
Not sure if Bill Engvall, or just hilarious coincidence. Either way, Spartan can fit himself into anything of Twilight's. Ifyouknowwhatimean.avi.
I can picture the dinner now
Twilight and the spartan walk in
Luna sits up from her chair to greet them but freezes in shock at the sight of the spartan
Not missing a beat spartan hurls the most spear like object in the room at Luna
While screaming of course
His armor was heavy through off his aim he discarded it
His sheild would have stilled his leg he threw it aside
A hysterical purple unicorn had grabbed onto his back and was screaming he threw his spear
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Moar? ;puppydog eyes:
“Rainbow, what’re you doing in the closet?”
I see what you did there
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If he qould try this Twi could just give him another magical blast (i forgot the wort Aegis used for this) and he would sit down, to me it seems that he respects Twi as a warrior
Waiting for next part of this great story
Celestia up to her old tricks, tut tut tut, will be interesting to say the least
This has been a marvelously fun ride! An excellent blend of humor, good storytelling and real character development. And Shield is wonderfully done and multidimensional and helps tell the tale without taking over from all of the others (a common fail of many OCs!). I look forward to the further adventures and his growing and wonderful relationship with Twilight.
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*Spear*
“I can fit myself into anything of Twilight’s!”
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Also, I t is vey childish of Celestia not telling Luna about Spartan just to see how It will go. He will probably have a rage attack; somepony could end up injuried, even dead!
“I can fit myself into anything of Twilight’s!”
i see what you did there
-Every pony is seated at the table-
-Enter Luna-
-Spartan Sheild rage mode engaged-
Enjoy
You brilliant, brilliant bastard. Clever, aren't we?
So they want rainbow dash to come out of the closet... So they to think she is swayed by the same gender ..
Spartan Shield vs. Princess Luna!? I've said it before, and I'll say it again: If ever there was a time to make a statement regarding the reality of excrement, that time is now.
Shit just got real!
817914 I was thinking the same thing!
Also, Trollestia strikes again.
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This.
Oh Aegis, you spoil us~
Another great chapter!
Also Aegis, I was just wondering ... do you know Adamant and Westwood, by any chance? I'd be very interested on you opinion of them if you do.
I don't like the vibe that Luna picked up near the end. Sounds bad for Spartan, if you ask me.
819416 I do not!
But now I have something cool to read today! Thank you so much! :D
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No problem.
Here, have art. That was my secondary reaction to your reply.
Anyway, I don't actually think that Shield and Luna will fight. Luna doesn't look anything like NNM, so you'd have to be pretty damn stupid to make a mistake like that.
819820 Yay! Thanks for the arts!