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A SECOND CHAPTER ALREADY?!?!?!
thank you my good sir. Will have to read this later today. Love the story
oh right......first.......
Oh, i just noticed. Congrats on getting featured!
WHAT
Sneaky little bunny.
Daring Do!
Nice twist with Angel Bunny's secret role.
Not sure if Blue Box is going to be a Doctor Whoves reference or if that guess would be a red herring...
Well, I certainly didn't expect Spartan to be so exactly correct about Fluttershy...
interesting
I just went on a huge marathon, reading this whole story in the past hour, and lo and behold as SOON as I'm done a new chapter comes out....
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Fucking sexy timing.
Whoa! that was interesting! Keep it up, and I wonder what Flutters meant by do not fear a blue box...
“Violence begets violence…” Okay, so don't keep on fighting or else you'll be in even MORE trouble.
“A weeping mare loves…” Weeping mare... Twilight maybe?
“Fear not a blue box...” Oh I can see that this is going to be a problem... DOCTOR!!
“Plant a tree with love...” Plant a tree obviously... or an orchard.
“Honor the gods...” Celestia and Luna obviously.
“Honor your love…” Twilight again I'm guessing.
“Forsake thy anger...” Same as the first one. Let go of the past basically.
“Embrace in the night…” Either Aegis Shield descendent or learn to accept Princess Luna as she is now rather than who she was back then.
Well, this should be aheh, entertaining to say the least. I wonder how he's going to react to The Doctor... or maybe they've already met who knows?
Seems legit.
I stayed up until 3 am to read this chapter and write this comment.
It was worth it.
I guess I probably should be writing my own story write now but... Angel Bunny is legendary.
This is my favourite chapter so far, with the symposium a close second.
Wow, I really liked this chapter.
Not sure why, I'm not even a big Fluttershy fan, but the tone and the strange reveal of it all was quite awesome to read.
Well done, sir. This story continues to go well.
BLUE BOX?!?!?
yay! doctor whooves time!
also, were those the artifact bits, cause if they were twilight is going to be PISSED
The Doctor must perish!!! All hail the cyberponies, all hail the cyberking!!!!
I liked this chapter alot!
I think that maybe Flutters should become aware of her powers, it would make for a very intereating story line.
830492 You're gonna love the updating schedule, haha...
Thanks for reading! Hope you stay with us for the ride!
Well... That was awesome. Fluttershy is best seer.
oh I see what you did there, very smart and demining =D
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Oh I will.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Fluttershy_lolface.png
And adding Doctor Whoovesness made me like this story even more.
AWESOME. Angel as a...whatever...simply amazing idea. And...
“Fear not a blue box...”
I see what you did there...and I'm looking forward to it
“Plant a tree with love...”
Please don't tell me it is what I think it is
Mareathon and this comes, makes me happy
“Plant a tree with love...”
If taht mean what i think it is, then holy shit that's foreshadowing
Angel just got 2000% cooler.
Fear not a blue box...”.
DOCTOR
Excellent, as always. Your attention to detail once again impresses.
And no creepy/disgusting misshapen horny stallions to look after the sweet, innocent, and deceptively dangerous Fluttershy like the oracles of ages past.
Good.
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I'm gone for a week and you go from appleblom almost dieing to this.
You sir, are amazing.
Loved the Doctor Who reference Or maybe it's Doctor Whooves? I just can't tell in this fandom
And the chapters are coming pretty fast too. Keep up the great work
huh... only twelve years later, time sure does fly when your having fun!
He's going see fluttershy instead of zecora? LOL
Well hope he isn't to disappointed, after all she is wise and "THE STARE" proves she is powerful.
*reads more*
???...?? okay angle seems to be acting a little strange... couldn't be....
".. she knows not her powers"
*finishes reading*
processing... processing... processing....
IT ALL MAKES SENSE!
The druid spoke her prophecy. He spoke the words aloud, for every phrase had a pause between it and the next:
“Violence begets violence…”
“A weeping mare loves…”
“Fear not a blue box...”
(le me slaming hand on the table)
Well buck, here comes Doctor Whooves!
Alright!
fluttershy was all really high sooooooo high
Fluttershy as an oracle. I would have never guessed it could be done well, but I have been proven wrong.
just...
i bet the blue box bit was to get people guessing The Doctor and then you'll do something else entirely
Nice work, and I like how you passed Indiana Jones' archeology professor background over to Daring Do for this. It fits perfectly and strengthens the ties between the two characters while setting up an interesting scene down the line when she finds out about what happened to her "statue".
>>Jaffaarchfiend
"He would’ve written it down, but that would’ve been blasphemous"
And look what you did....shame on you
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*Ahem* WTF IS YOU AVATAR!?!?!?!?
Oh yes, Also.
You really need to put a romance Tag on this story Shield
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Ok, color me shocked on this, right along with Fluttershy. I would have thought that Zecora would have been a better fit for an oracle, but then it occurs to me that Twilight still hasn't gotten around to telling Spartan about the Zebrican living in the Everfree. Actually, now that I think of it, I doubt that Spartan would have considered her as a possible oracle anyway, what with the whole Spartan xenophobic attitude which I doubt he's had much reason to work on as of yet. Spike gets a pass on that as he is obviously under the control of the solar mage. Frankly, I'm sort of surprised that Fluttershy really was an oracle, though in retrospect, it does explain a bit about her hesitance with flight. Oracles don't always need their vapors and smokes to go into trance, and flying when that occurs doesn't lead to good landings. Although, if Angel Bunny really does come from a line of oracle guardians like he's showing now, I expect that one line of Fluttershy's ancestors have always been drawn to the earth in place of the skies.
Good use of the oracular standards for the ceremony, that pretty much covered the standard pattern for a Delphic oracle other than having a portable vapor source rather than a natural volcanic vent for the source of the prophetic fugue. I'll give you high marks for that prophecy, too. Very vague, lots of points that can be interpreted several different ways, and hints that likely will only make sense in hindsight once they have occurred. (Frankly, I think that the whole "blue box" line is a massive red herring for the readers, but that's always good to keep us guessing.) I have a few ideas as to where parts of the prophecy might be going, but I'll wait and see if I'm on the right track or not.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy.png
Oh, and nice touch with the new flashback series. The archeologist was an interesting choice. I take it that she was the prototype for the novel series that enthralls Rainbow Dash and Twilight Sparkle these days? I suppose we'll see in the next installment, if the expedition encounters trouble from a rival archeologist out to claim credit for the find.... Hmmm.... you're not trying to slip in a little prototype Daring Do story sample on us as a flashback, are you? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_dayum.png
Edit: Something else that just occurred to me. Most oracles, once awakened, couldn't turn off their powers fully again. Even without the proper enhancements, Fluttershy is probably going to be a little more Pinkie-like for a while with some of her comments and actions.
Holy BUCK! Is there anything you and Angel can not DO? This is getting very bad as, buck I'm having a great day when I see an update for this story
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The Watermelon / Banana Monster guards some scroll in a kung fu movie. It headbutts the shit out of people and shoots metal tentacles at them.
Wow, just wow! You're story is amazing, good sir. Makes me laugh at every turn. :]
Especially with the whole Fluttershy Oracle/Druid thing. Here I am, thinking this is a hilarious misunderstand and `oh, the shenanigans that could come from this!` ... and then BAM! It's not just a silly misunderstanding!
I'm like whaaaaaaat?!
But it caught my attention and drew me in further.
You, sir, are an amazing storyteller!
Good show~
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What. The Frack?
..... Right, pardon me while I go shoot myself In the foot. It will be funner then trying to understand just how many different Drugs the maker of that was on.
Wonderful chapter darling, Spartan shield being correct in his first impression of fluttershy was quite interesting. A druid and an oracle, a wonderfully unexpected twist
Ciao darling
fucking hate the doctor
“Fear not a blue box...”
.... Is that a Dr. Who[oves] reference? This story just got 20% better! Allons-y!
That chapter... SO awesome!
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“A weeping mare loves…”
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“Embrace in the night…”
I think I know where THIS is going to