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Hmm, isn't the part with Daring Do supposed to be italicized like the other chapters?
870420 Fix'd.
Nice job Spartan-YOU SNAPPED 'S SPINE!
Uh-oh.
:I
Guess that means you lost dude...
you snapped his spine you fool!
dayum
oh lawd!...this chapter was almost as awesome as rainbowdash
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MFW Last line.
ohhh crap.
.......Damn.
That one word causes chills quite unlike any other. Spartan's troubles have just been increased by ten-fold.
ohhhh.. I'm looking forward to seeing how this turns out!
Well, damn.
Looks like somepony is gunna be in some deep trouble. I wonder what it will be, flaming Twilight, enraged Celly, for having her...er...favorite toy broken, or a very peeved AJ? Curse you cliffhangers. This was a VERY interesting chapter indeed!
well... shit. Spartan done fked up this time.
It was pretty much obvious Spartan would destroy him, i mean, a spartan against a farmer?
How could even big mac do so much damage to him?
Oh shit! Fluttershy told you no violence Spartan, but nooooooo, you had to break your friends spine.
Well this won't turn out well..could this be one of the druid's prophecies?
Edit: Damn beaten by 36 seconds lol.
Ha. At least Spartan's superior to Big Mac. Who cares about the loser anyways? Spartan, you are awesome. Aw, is Big Mac gonna be little crybaby over his loss to the obviously better Spartan. Tough love, baby, that's how I roll.
Oh dear. Sounds like somepony may have had their spine snapped. On a lesser note, I wonder how Daring would react to meeting with Spartan now that he isn't a statue?
Shit just got real!
And that's how Big Mac became a filly.
That snap. Snaps are always bad. ALWAYS! But theyve got magic they can fix a shattered spine right? i might seem like a medical nerd but if spartan punched him hard enough to to snap his spine he wouldnt be conscious since the impact was at the jaw. His brian would of been rattled silly. Also u can only survive a broken neck if its right at the bottum of the neck. Since the impact started t the jaw the the head spinned with such force that the vertabrae broke and shatter would of happened at the top of the neck wear the medulla is. The medulla stops working and so do some of your major body functions like the heart. So big mac your lucky the author didnt do his homework. Haha i kid i kid. Im not even sure myself. Just rambling. I honestly thought make died though. Good job i check everyday for updates on this.
spartan: "i know how to fix this!"
narrator: "CASTING ---- CURATIO"
props to whoever gets the reference
:D
Huh, well thats not good.
O_O...oh noo....Oh damn...and remember....big mac in this universe is Celestia's lover...
That is one dead spartan pony.
As soon as I read "There he stayed" I knew Spartan fucked up
Maybe it's just me but when I read this line- '...sidled up to the statue. “What’s that, Spartan Stallion? Run away with you?”' I immediately thought of the scene in the The Little Mermaid where Ariel is talking to the statue of Prince Eric.
Oh noes,
Oh. Well then. Fuck.
All I got to say is, Big Mac ain't a mare. Crack his neck back into shape and he'll be fine!
Slaps Author For Implications*
Oh...shit. I knew something bad was going to happen!
Well That What happens when you go fight something who been training to fight since he been able to crowl
Well fuck me in the face i was not expecting such damage hopefully magic will save his red ass
From the kick to the face... I had thought Big Mac had died... cause, the brain stem would have been snapped in two; but it's cool now that I know it's only the midsection of the vertebra... not that it's any better now that Big Mac is now crippled, but it's a damn sight better than him dead.
Oh right... DAMN CLIFFHANGERS! Now I have to wait to read what happens next
i think a new spod is open in sweet aplle acers... if he likes it or not... somepony needs to fill B.Mac's place
that *snap* i was like: ''its over dude''
Ah, clueless Twilight
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Ah agree. Big Mac is best male pony in story.. an he now crippled.870691
Final Fantasy if not wrong...
Well... this is the part where Twilight yells at Spartan "I told you so!" Right after she fixes of course.
Who wants to bet that the Oracle's warning of Violence begets violence is ringing through his head right now?
I would like to remind you Mr. Aegis that you have Comedy, Adventure, Slice of Life tags. If you will go Sad and Grimdark with ths story many people (me included) will be very disapointed in you.
I hope you will clear up this situation in the next chapter and the "Ah cain't feel mah LEGS!" will be a catharsis for our hero.
well then, spartan shield can add spine-snapper to his list of titles... that stallion straight up fcks sht up!
oh snap that was bad
The brony above me is right and I think you should apologize to us mister for trying to make
Us think even for 1 second that Big Mac will never be able to walk again! You should be ashamed of yourself! Now go and write the next chapter so we can learn of Big Mac's recovery with magic! (There is no fluttershy stare icon)
umm not the chapter that is
So now, Spartan needs to collect money for Big Mac's surgery. After enduring two enraged mares and a goddess with the power of the sun. Great job, Spartan!
under him like a car mechanic
"car mechanic"
They have cars?
The worst part is, Twilight is going to be unbearable after this little debacle...
Ouchies... Poor Big Mac
On the brighter side, if it's pinched nerves in his neck he'll be OK in a week or so. Had that happen once... it's not fun thinking you're paralyzed for a few minutes and then pain like you wouldn't believe when the vertebrae gets popped back into place and everything starts working again.
Of course Spartan's going to have to deal with a raging Twilight, a POed AJ and a sad Applebloom and that's just his immediate problems...
Its simple, he donates the money to charity, then collects all of his "Monies" from the princess, which he in turn spends to fix up Big
AND EVERYPONY WAS
Except Luna who was all like
Well... Spartan is stuffed
........And then when Spartan gets close to examine him Big Mac jumps up and knocks him out. And everyone finds out Mac is a sore loser and will do anything to when, even faking a broken spine.......... right?