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Aw hell yeah!
Next chapter please.
Pleeeeease...
776859>>776897 I got featurrrred!
*does the yes-yes-yes dance*
776922
Congrats bro you deserve it for such a unique fic
I'm really looking forward to reading more of this! Keep up the good work!
Nice chapter. Anyone else think of Halo 2 when Pinkie was referred to as "the demon"
SPARTAN SHIELD VERSUS APPLEJACK! OR BIG MAC!
great chapter, looking forward to the next.
Spartan Shield: “Away with you, lest you be molested by the next who arrives!”
Twilight Sparkle: FACEHOOF!
Me: I can see were this is going...
nice chapter. Keep it up!
This chapter, I like it! Another! *smash*
whoops that was my mouse o.O
PONIES! TONIGHT, WE DINE, IN...wait...Hey commander, where were we dining again?
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I gonna read this tomorrow. 4 now, I go to bed. Good night!
He seems to be less than pleased with Pinkie's antics. Pinkie vs Shield round two please. His pain makes me laugh.
Well, I hope he sees luna sometime soon. The fun to be had, and it is all just about to start.
Oh and as a time-bender don't write chapter 7, just skip it. ~te-hee.
wait what will happen when he meets luna?????
FUUUUUUU--------!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SHIT WILL HIT THE FAN!!!!!
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Long comment is long. It hurts my brain!
“Wash you mane with that, it’ll be fine.”
... You know what needs to be done.
Okay, before reading this, I have a question: when you say 'very real Spartan idealism', to you mean Spartan idealism based on the movie (300), or based on reality?
I am pleased to see you incorporated the whole thing with the oil and scraper. I can't imagine many folks know about that.
Also who else is looking forward to "CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS: SPARTAN WARRIORS!!!!! YEEAAAAHHH!!!"
Holy buck NO DISLIKES (Yet) Dat is dur good sign, (Please continue)
I love this story. The Spartan is so orginallly created....bam...best OC woohoo. Just write more and more and more and more and......
777775 Based on historical facts, with bits of 300 for comedy
777846 Yeah, the oil and scraper was usually just for athletes, but I figured I could get away with it either way.
777139 I completely agree with that statement.
777846 BUCK YEAH!!!
742503
HOW DID YOU GET THE DISCORD EMOTICON! Please?
777457
Hah! This whole chapter reminds me of that scene from the movie.
Btw, forgot to mention, epic never-ending story reference.
777846
YEEEAAAAAAHHHH!!!!
Oh sweet Celestia, that would be the day...
"CHAAAAAARRRGE!!!!"
778789 What? Where?
778820 Descendant from Artax Fantasia himself
lols
778860 Ah, right!
Spartan Shield vs. Panzer hoof. Do want
"It his time, the baths" In his time maybe? It just doesn't feel right
“Wash you mane with that" Your
Oh no. I just got a horrible thought.
This has all the setups made for a " THIS IS *insert random thing here*!"
I really enjoyed the scene with Pinkie Pie.
Also, "In Pinchy we trust". Nice...
777324 And then Molestia walks in
780524
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I like where this is going.
>set the container aside and pulled the bucket-wth-scraper close
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778759 dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy_umad.png
780524 dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png
780705 dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png
777846 gods help them all when that happens.
He's like Thor when he first arrived on Earth, lol
777139 Big Mac.
Your idea is a little mind boggling isn't it? That ponies have no concept of nudity? It's just a little hard to comprehend, living in the society of modesty that we do. So ponies DO see other pony's... Ahem, yeah. But to them it's like 'yeah, so what'? That's kind of crazy. I love Leonidas, I mean Shining Shield. Truly a funny character.
Heh, I go away for a couple of days, and I come back to a bumper crop of Spartan Stallion chapters. This is all to the good!
I see that Spartan's getting his first view of the reformed Equestria on the flight down to Ponyville. I can believe that to his combat-oriented mind, the entire area has become one huge deathtrap for friendly forces, and is only safe for Canterlot due to it's elevation that allows for ranged fields of fire (presuming, of course, that there's anyone other than the mages that know the first thing about combat these days.) His first encounter with Pinkie Pie went pretty much as I expected, Pinkie's extensive use of her personal dimensional door ability was pretty much used to perfection to drive him right round the bend. (Frankly, though, I hope that Pinkie's Sense is up to the task of dodging his spear from now on, because I am reasonably sure that he's going to be on hair-trigger against another assault the next time he hears her voice (or sees a solid pink pony outline, for that matter.) I don't... no, strike that, I most definitley want to hear Twilight attempting to explain Pinkie to Spartan. I can't begin to imagine what she is going to do to attempt to explain the Pink One to the warrior.
Good touch in the spa, with the oil and scraper. That was mostly for athletes, I thought, but it would make sense that fighters would tend to use the same cleansing techniques after a fight, at least as long as there were no serious wounds that needed to be treated. And good touch with his reaction to Twilight using the same bathing chamber, I would imagine that the whole unisex approach to most activities in current day Equestria is going to be a big adjustment for the big guy. (Oh, and I see that Twilight's getting a twinge of hormones there for the displaced warrior. I can't fault her body for reacting that way, though I still say that if Spartan had any idea of she might do if she decides he's a good research topic, he'd be heading for the Everfree even now.
Let's see what the next chapter's like.
805463 Trufla's back, yayyy! I missed you!
1337 views, holy ge moly!
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SPARTANS RULE!!!
Chapter 3 Editation Complete!
*typos mentioned in comments corrected.
*Spartan's physical description in the baths reworked.